Barbara Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 Martha was waiting for Jack to open up. She's thinking she's responsible for Alf's death. It's not her fault! Poor girl! Idea for the next chapter: lots of JM moments! More please. Quote
Yankee White Posted October 13, 2008 Report Posted October 13, 2008 (edited) Aw... She looked towards Martha’s bed and gasped. There, fast asleep, was Martha. Clinging to Jack like there was no tomorrow. A tear ran down Sally’s cheek as she saw Martha’s red blotchy eyes and the big wet patch on Jack’s shirt. “I know this probably isn’t the right time to tell you”, Jack spoke into her hair. “But… I’ve left Sam… We’re free”, he sighed. Martha lifted her head from his chest to look at him. “There’s always a good time to tell me that”, she tried to smile. *laughs so hard it hurts* lol. So true, so true. As for the next chapie: Fluff. Plain and Simple. Nah... I don't mind. I'm sure you'll think of something. Don't make it a short fic pretty pwease with sugar on top, followed by a cherry (that can be taken off and replaced with a dollep of chocolate if you don't like cherries.), coated in sherbet and sprinkels, and then with a perfectly toasted marshmallow (goooy and warm on the inside and slightly toasted on the outside.) and a drizzel of chocolate on top? Come on who could resist that? Edited October 13, 2008 by Yankee White Quote
Zetti Posted October 13, 2008 Report Posted October 13, 2008 She looked towards Martha’s bed and gasped. There, fast asleep, was Martha. Clinging to Jack like there was no tomorrow. A tear ran down Sally’s cheek as she saw Martha’s red blotchy eyes and the big wet patch on Jack’s shirt Damn it I cried then! I dont have a suggestion but it will be good whatever you put. Quote
zzazzb Posted October 17, 2008 Report Posted October 17, 2008 (edited) yay Drunk Martha is hilarious big J&M wedding :wub: yayayay. ily for that chapter! awesomee.e EDIT: Next is last *tear* another story after that??? yeahh? Edited October 17, 2008 by zzazzb Quote
Barbara Posted October 17, 2008 Report Posted October 17, 2008 Aw lots of JM fluff! Yay they're going to get married again. You got to love a drunk Martha! More please. Quote
stephyrose4 Posted October 17, 2008 Author Report Posted October 17, 2008 (edited) “Pretty!?”, he exclaimed. “Pfft... try the sexiest”, Naaw You can be pretty and sexy at the same time Jack! That was a very cute chapter, love the J&M Fluff as well. It's always good to have fluffy j&M fics, there's not much of them around now, and plus there always so dramatic lol. Oh the next chapter is the last chapter, no That's gay as. I hope you do another fic, cos I enjoy reading them Ha ha love drunk Martha, just like everyone else said, shes hilarious. More please. Edited October 17, 2008 by stephyrose4 Quote
Zetti Posted October 17, 2008 Report Posted October 17, 2008 “You, Jack Holden, are the most prettiest guy I have ever met!”, she cooed, squeezing his cheeks with her hands. “Pretty!?”, he exclaimed. “Pfft... try the sexiest”, he winked back at her. Damn, Hot,Pretty and Sexy Quote
dee83 Posted October 23, 2008 Report Posted October 23, 2008 Great so hope no one comes between them after all they`ve come so far and their happy so please don`t let anyone come betwen them Update Soon Quote
zzazzb Posted October 23, 2008 Report Posted October 23, 2008 that was cute as loved everyone embarrasing them at the table! and colleen was just so... Colleen i'm glad your continuing Next Chapter: Will something ruin their happiness? lets not go into how i feel about that Quote
Zetti Posted October 23, 2008 Report Posted October 23, 2008 (edited) "Oh my god!", Martha groaned as she tucked her head into her arms. "What did she dooooooooooo!!!!!???????", Jack yelled. He could hardly contain himself from the suspense. "She kissed you", he laughed hysterically, stopping as he heard a loud thump. Jack had fallen off his chair and was now on the ground crying, laughing. "Ha" Roars of laughter surrounded Martha as she sat in her chair, humiliated. "I cannot BELIEVE you Ric", she screeched. aww too damn cute Next Chapter: Will something ruin their happiness? It had better not Edited October 23, 2008 by *Zetti* Quote
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