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The ending was fantastic, I love how you wrapped everything up so beautifully and omg! you need another cookie because you did what so many should of done but don't and that is the Amanda/Chris bit.. they will always love each other, but not in that way, that was the sweetest bit. I'm glad you added Justin, although at first I was worried he was working with Kelli because he didn't want Aden to look at his phone, so it was nice to see he was just being there for his brother.

Your story makes me wish I had seen more of Jazz (I.E without Drew) on the real HAA, Chris and Jazz were just made for each other (i wonder why.. lol) but silly me had to stop for a second to remember that Belle and Geoff aren't related so Geoff and Abby aren't distantly related which makes that all good.

Anyway, I will look forward to further fic's from you (hint.hint)

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Aha! The forum's back!! Now I can repeat all the nice things I said on the temp forum :D

That was AWESOME!!! :D I stayed up til 2.30am reading it because I couldn't put it down ^_^ I just HAD to know how it ended! And I wasn't disappointed AT ALL!!!!!

Loved the insight into everyone's history - I feel like I know all the characters better now, which I think is what a good fic should do. Jazz and Sam were so cute. And I love that Chris is falling for Jazz - awww :wub:. I was worried when he kissed Amanda - I was all "What about Jazz and Peter!? You can't leave them hanging!!!" But you didn't, so yay :D

(Well now I've run out of emoticons... *rolls eyes.*)

Loved the introduction of Justin, and what his being around means to Aden. First he's a bad reminder of the past, but then he's an invaluable support system, which is something that Aden's needed all along. Not to mention a handy plot device for missing important phone calls *wink.* The flashback to Justin trying to get Larry to DO something was brilliant... and sad... *sad face.*

The baby kicking so that Belle knew it was okay... that was so sweet, and such a relief because I had been worried about the baby... I also really like how you described the day of the birth - really quick, basic description that got the point across effectively. If I'd written that, I'd have spent like six pages detailing the clothes Belle packed in her overnight bag *roll eyes.*

And finally, K-E-L-L-(Insufferable)I. I hate her so, so much. And I am so, so glad that you shot her dead. Thank you. A thousand times, thank you. It was so satisfying. And it was an unexpected point of sympathy for Kitty as well - after all she'd done, you still managed to make me feel sorry for her. Incredible really. Well done! *BIG GRIN!*

*BIG GRIN BIG GRIN BIG GRIN!!!!!*

Oh, and I almost forgot - Abby and Geoff - too cute *wub*

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Wow thank you everyone. Regarding a sequel or my next fiction i'm undecided as yet. I think there's a basis for a sequel but then I don't want to ruin what i've already got, but there definately will be something (whatever it may be) from me in the future! :)

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I meant to ask, was it you who entered the last fic comp with the scene about Jazz introducing Drew and Peter for the first time? The characters and style were similar to this fic, that's all. I enjoyed both a great deal :D

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