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awwwww.

I love this story so much, I just found it by chance and its just awesome. Amanda and Belle and Chris much such a cute family, except Chris is with Jazz. I also love how your havent made any characters "evil", Like Jazz and Drew, even though they being a pain (i.e Drew trying to get Belle back (almost wrote Aden instead of Belle :o)) they are still human and we can see their side.

Your just a natural writer, well not just as in just but just as in really really great, the flow of story is flowly (damn my lack of words but I hope you get what i mean) and the flash backs are great :wub:

I hope, tho that the title isnt as true to the story as I fear....

one last note, I also find it extremely awesomely cool that you kept Adens's past problems rather than just ignoring them for sake of the story.

Update soon please

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I am hooked!!!!!! This is written beautifully!!!!!! I can't wait to read more!!!!!! I am loving the Adelle storyline and how the story flicks from past to present. I do hope Adelle lasts!!! I am so addicted to this story!!!! Update soon please :D

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Awwww, Belle had to save Aden :wub: and Aden saved Sam and awww, that was a cute, if dangerous scene :)

I hope Amanda decision won't come back and bite her, I do wonder who the other women is tho...

please update soon :D

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Oooo, so many updates :D Great updates too :)

OMG! I hope Sam will be ok. :( That was a very sense part of the chapter. Well written, I thought. Poor Kitty. :( I know what she did was wrong but hopefully Amanda will be able to make up with her before anything happens. I wonder who is on the phone...Possibly Kellie? :unsure:

Update soon.

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