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Hmmm Kelli :ph34r:

“You’ve been here all day” Chris noted

“I want to be here” Jazz insisted

Aww Jazz is awesome :D

Love Adelle and the baby bump :wub:

Update soon :)

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What I love about this story is that it takes a completely original slant on everything. Its well written and about interesting characters which are bought to life exceptionally well.

I do have a word of warning for you though if you'll not take offence at me suggesting it, you've introduced a lot of new characters recently and while I can't disagree with anyopne you've bought in I'd just be wary of giving yourself too much to do. I've been in a situation before whereby I've had great ideas for characters and kept bringing them in to the detriment of the core characters. I don't think you're likely to do that, your Amanda and Belle are very strong and very much still driving this but I just felt it was worth a warning.

I really do enjoy reading this and I hope you update soon. :)

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