Unlucky (by Taniya_K) - comments

[SAM27#]

awwwwwww

very cute chapter!!!!!!

update soon...can't wait to see what happens when Belle goes to Amanda's and what Aden's secret!!!!!

[xknomex]

awwww

love this fic update ASAP

[jessica_2005]

Awwwwww. AWesome update. Loved it.

AWwwwwww. Aden painting Belles nails.

AWww.

Cant wait for moree.

Love Jess

xoxo

[Broken_Ghost]

Love this story.

I just read the whole thing and I am in LOVE with it:)

xoxo

[xknomex]

awww i love adelle.

the moments when they have no problems or are having serious talks are my favourite! so i loved this update

[Jody]

How on earth did you come to the conclusion that this chapter was not all that good?

I loved lighthearted Adelle. The banter between them is awesome. There are a few Adelle writers who are able to truly make you feel like your reading something that could pass for the actual Home and Away script and you are definetely one of them. So I don't think you need to worry about chapters not being good enough.

I love that Annie is gossiping with Aden. I keep imagining what that would look like. And he knows where everyone is even when she doesn't, how cute is that.

[bexxx123]

loved this chapter!!! i think this is one of the best adelle fics on here so keep on writing!!!

[adelle]

Awwwww, that was sooo good! I love how Aden knows what's going on with everybody, its cute

I'm loving this fic so much, please update soon!!

[wooo_im_cool]

wow that chapter was awesome!!

update ?

[adelle4eva]

awesome!

i noe im slow but why did aden go to the city again?

or did Taniya not mention it yet?

sorry just my head is sooo confused with all the other adelle fanfics