The Coastal Junior (by Luc) - comments

[LAURZY!]

Aden is obsessed!! its obvious for everyone to see

Brill update as per usual, really looking forward to reading more

[Jody]

Important, Geoff? She asked him as she pulled a ruler out of her desk draw and placed it down on a large sheet of grey paper, She just asked me how I was,

Well, that is important, He told Lola. His voice cracked. How are you?

Fine Mel, on one condition. Tell me why you told Claudia Hagen that I was obsessed with Belle, He paused to see if Annie answered.

You didnt want her to know? Melody asked him from the other end in mock horror. Aden forced another laugh,

I am not obsessed with Belle Taylor! He growled at the blonde. And stop looking at me like that, He told her before hanging up.

I burst out laughing at these two parts. Especially Geoffs one.

Melody and Aden were both awesome in this chapter. The these two need more scenes.

Please update soon.

Edited December 16, 2008 by Jody

[meant2live]

lol made me giggle lots. Loved it

Thank you, more please

[Adelle_fan1000]

Thanks Laurzy, xknomex and Taniya. I'll be updating soon, after I've recovered from my exams . Anyway, I started making graphics earlier today to wind down, and I eventually did this for the fic (It's pretty big, so click on the link to see it). It shows them and the character from Press Gang they were based on.

Click here!

Also, a preview of next chapter...

“I really need to talk to you about how you intend to spend the money,” He said calmly. Melody turned around, a look of impatience on her face.

“I told you already. I gave you that submission thingy!” She snapped before walking back into the graphics room. Geoff pulled out a white sheet of paper and followed her into the graphics department.

“Graphics Department spending proposals,” He read out as Melody sat down and pulled a ruler out of her drawer and placed it on a large sheet of grey paper. “A 2B Pencil and a sun bed!” He shot at her, placing the submission sheet in front of her.

“I can explain the pencil,” She said, folding her arms across her chest. Geoff rolled his eyes.

Ahhh the Coastal Team are much better looking

O and great work so far

[Luc]

these two need more scenes.

If all goes to plan, Melody will be having almost as many scenes as Belle if the sequel I'm thinking about goes ahead . Thanks for the comments guys, and I promise I will update very soon! Here's a preview of the next chapter, anyway .

“See, you aren’t even trying!” He complained. Melody watched as he turned his head around. She pulled her dress up slightly and watched as Geoff coughed again. “Lola, can I see you in the meeting room?” He asked nervously, turning to the red-headed girl. She looked over at the deputy editor nervously.

“I’m impressed,” Melody whispered to him with a look of amazement in her eyes.

“I’m going to go in there now,” Geoff said to the blond, he pointed over to the room Lola was entering, “And if you hear screaming and crying, you know what you have to do,” He grinned at her.

“Calm you down and get you a glass of water?” Melody suggested with a smirk on her face.

[Jody]

If all goes to plan, Melody will be having almost as many scenes as Belle if the sequel I'm thinking about goes ahead . Thanks for the comments guys, and I promise I will update very soon! Here's a preview of the next chapter, anyway .

Now I really hope you do the sequel. I love Melody here. She is so funny and the rivalry between her and Belle is so much fun to read. So more Mel would be good but as long as she doesn't become evil and start plotting against the paper.

The preview sounds good.

Edited December 20, 2008 by Jody

[LAURZY!]

Belle wrote a book called The Fluffy-Wuffies and the Silly-Billies?? she'd absolutely kill him!

Melody's a tramp lol i cant believe i actually like her in this, i despise her in the actual show!

I dont see why Geoff couldn't be into that kinda music Im intrigued!!!

Loved it once again, cant wait to read more

[Jody]

“You think that you can just sit on my desk, cross your legs, ruffle my hair, you think that I’ll fire Lola Pearson?” Geoff asked as turned his head over to the young girl.

“I haven’t ruffled your hair,” Melody whispered seductively. Geoff rolled his eyes and shook his head.

“See, you aren’t even trying!” He complained. Melody watched as he turned his head around. She pulled her dress up slightly and watched as Geoff coughed again. “Lola, can I see you in the meeting.

OMG! This was hilarious. I love this Melody. Poor Geoff, he didn't stand a chance. This scene completely made this chapter for me.

Aden and his 'M' words were funny. Annie had some good lines too.

Angelo, I can only imagine what hes plotting now.

As for Geoff and the music, I can't imagine what kind of music he would like but I can't see any reason why he wouldn't like that.

Please update soon.

[LAURZY!]

Go Belle

Once again i really loved it!!

Angelo should know he cant egt the better of Belle

Liking the sound of the next chapter

[Jody]

“She’s gonna die,” Angelo grinned before continuing, “The evil little goblin would always get up to all manners of mischievous things, and the beautiful princess had her work cut out trying to put a top to it. One day, the beautiful princess told the evil little goblin that if he didn’t have the financial report ready for the next Coastal Junior meeting, she would cut off his...” Angelo slammed the book closed before the younger girls could read it.

This part was so funny. Is Angelos character really based on a specific character from the show you wrote about(can't remember the name) or have you made him up? Because his just awesome(well maybe not him but his lines).

So Belles a little bit of softie after all.

I don't know what came over me.

Must be firing people.

> Loved this line.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Nice hint. I know what I want it to mean but I guess I'll have to wait and see.