The Coastal Junior (by Luc) - comments

[Luc]

Thanks Jody and Laurzy . Jody, Angelo is based on Colin Matthews frtom Press Gang. I needed a bit of comic relief in the fic, because of some of the serious storylines, and I thought, Colin would be a great character to adapt for it .

[Jody]

I needed a bit of comic relief in the fic, because of some of the serious storylines, and I thought, Colin would be a great character to adapt for it .

Well it certainly worked. Angelo does bring some comic relief to this story. I wish we got this show where I live. It sounds so good.

[LAURZY!]

Lmao, he rang Dublin, he got Glasgow!! typical Geoff lol its two completely different countries! hahaha

at Drew and Aden! please say Ruby and Drew get together, that would be quite sweet, saying that...so would Ruby and Geoff

Loved it as per

Edited December 28, 2008 by LAURZY!

[Jody]

Drew and Aden. Hilarious. The scene with them and Ruby was my favourite. And the quip Ruby made about Melody not talking to her.

I was just about to write about how confused I was that were no pairings until I realised it was only part 1. Can't wait for the next one.

[SAM27#]

I don't think I have commented on your fic before, saying this I have though been reading it for a while now but never posted for some reason...anyway I think your fic is very entertaining, especially with the antics the gang members come up with....

Ruby leaving her handbag after spilling coke on her pants was a classic!! Melody's arrogance is so hilarious, I think she is so much better in this fic than she is in the actual show!!!

Can't wait for more!!

[LAURZY!]

Lmao at Belle, she's totally into him!!

Loved Ruby aswell!

I dont quite know the right words for Meldoy!

Cant wait for more!!

[Jody]

Belle is so in denial. She just needs to admit how much she wants him because she isn't fooling anyone.

The Ruby/Melody scene was funny. Loved Ruby's thoughts on Mel and Mathews 'serious relationship'. They are both awesome in this fic and it's nice to see them interact with each other.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Now that I know those pairings are coming soon, it's making me more impatient. The Aden/Belle one is obvious but I also can't wait to see who you are pairing everyone else with.

[meant2live]

love it, so funny. cant wait for more

[Luc]

Thanks Lauren, Jody and Trudi . I'm writing part three at the moment, so I thought I'd give youa preview. You will get an update soon, either later tonight, or tomorrow

“I’m visiting my Aunt in Melbourne,” Geoff said. Belle scoffed and rolled her eyes.

“Of course, your dear, old Aunt in Melbourne,” Belle snapped acidly, “What is it this time? Ill? Dead? Tell me Geoff, how do you justify being off work for her funeral on no less than eight separate occasions?” Belle asked him angrily. Geoff smiled.

“She is my Aunt!” Geoff shot in defence.

“Geoff, this woman has died a total of eight times!” Belle screamed in frustration. Geoff shrugged his shoulders.

“How do you think I feel?” He asked her with a small grin noticeable on his face. Belle rolled her eyes. “Now I've got to ring my Aunt,” Belle’s mouth dropped in disbelief, “In Glasgow... I mean Dublin,” He stuttered.

“Dead or alive?” Belle shouted. Geoff picked up the phone and placed it to his ear. He turned back towards his friend.

Also, I'm planning a serious storyline that features Angelo and Belle very heavily, but it will be mostly Angelo-centric. Don't worry, it's not just for the hell of it - it helps with character development

Edited December 31, 2008 by Luc

[LAURZY!]

I love Aden!! Hope Belle and him do go to the party!

Poor Ruby!

How is Geoff getting Glasgow when he's ringing Dublin?

Loved it