Symphony Posted January 7, 2009 Report Posted January 7, 2009 Ahhh I hope Geoff gets back through to his woman again!! Typical timing!! Ha, I'm the same, when I picture Aden as 'Spike' I'm like - ahh melt at the knees hehe ;) Loved this chapter, although Im intrigued as to what Melody did - and what relationship Ruby was talking about; did I miss something?! Don't want this fic to end though!!! Quote
Jody Posted January 8, 2009 Report Posted January 8, 2009 “You’re looking cheerful tonight,” Belle shot at him angrily, Geoff scoffed. “Sorry boss, I’ll work on that,” He answered. “That’s not what lasting relationships are based on,” Melody reassured her, “I should know, I've had hundreds!” Love these two. Aww Geoff. Hope they unfix it for him soon. Love Geoff taking off at Belle and Aden. And how timidly Belle asked Aden. I didn't know she was capable of being timid in this fic. Angelo and his pizza's are funny as well. I can't believe theres only two chapters left. So sad to see this end. Pleasae update soon. Quote
Luc Posted January 8, 2009 Report Posted January 8, 2009 (edited) There's a lot more left than two chapters, I should have made that clear . There's a long story arch of about 10-15 chapters . Symphony, Mel got rid of Ruby's name off of the review, so that it was anonymous, and Matthew would never find out who wrote it. The relationship she's talking about is with Matthew . I should also add that the chapters in this fic don't always link. They jump from month to month so that I can fit an entire year into 40-something chapters. Glad you're enjoying it though! The Glasgow girl might make a small appearance in the sequel . Edited January 8, 2009 by Luc Quote
Jody Posted January 8, 2009 Report Posted January 8, 2009 Good to know it's not finishing any time soon. Looking forward to that sequel as well. Quote
Symphony Posted January 8, 2009 Report Posted January 8, 2009 Ohhh, you confused me when you said there were two more chapters [still looks a little lost] BUT I'm thrilled to hear it's not ending anytime soon! Quote
Symphony Posted January 8, 2009 Report Posted January 8, 2009 Ohhh, you confused me when you said there were two more chapters [still looks a little lost] BUT I'm thrilled to hear it's not ending anytime soon! Quote
LAURZY! Posted January 8, 2009 Report Posted January 8, 2009 I love these two!! His suit is too short for him! i dont know why but i found that quite sweet lol Love then end about the jokes Brill update I think i prefer 'deadline' either or there both good! Quote
Taniya_K Posted January 8, 2009 Report Posted January 8, 2009 LMAO! Aw, Aden. How I love thee!?! I loved that entire chapter. Like always - it was brilliantly hilarious! Poor Aden though - he really wants that kiss, doesn't he? I'm sure that she wants one too... The sarcastic comments were so funny! I miss sarcastic banter between them two and you can do it awesomely Can't wait for more! xoxo Btw, I like the name 'The Summer Bay Files' for the sequel. I dunno why, but it just seems to link to this fic Quote
Jody Posted January 8, 2009 Report Posted January 8, 2009 Yay! A chapter full of Aden and Belle. Theses two were hilarious. Hilarious, I feel like I use that word atleast once in all my reviews for this fic. What can I say, I'm not very creative, and it really is hilarious. I loved this chapter. Definitely one of my favourites. "Because I rather come in". He shot back. "Theres a little knome in there I can talk to." Funniest line of the chapter. There were so many funny lines to quote and after taking a while to figure out which one to choose, I finally settled on this. Loved them teasing each other throughout the chapter. And aww she makes him nervous. Both titles sound good, but I prefer Deadline. Sounds better to me. Simple, and to the point. Quote
Luc Posted January 8, 2009 Report Posted January 8, 2009 (edited) Thanks guys ! The next chapters are only Aden and Belle centric, but another member of the news team will show their face . I'm still surprised nobody has picked up on my favourite line of this... “Yeah,” He replied. “I didn’t steal them from anybody’s garden. My friend Jessica...” Belle looked up from the coffee she was making and looked at Aden. “I said Jessica, not Belle,” Aden told her, “Oh, right,” She replied meekly before turning back to the bench. I just can't let it go unnoticed . I've set myself a challenge also, I have to mention the following names at least one before the fic finishes... Jessica - 9/1 Rebecca - 26/1 Todd - 24/1 Luke - 16/1 Lincoln - 18/1 Charlotte - 24/1 Rhys - 23/1 Bobby - 23/1 Celeste - 28/1 Sharni - 15/1 Edited January 28, 2009 by Luc Quote
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