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:lol: You know what, I'm ashamed to say this, but that line confused me until I read that edit of your post, Luc! :blush:

But now that I understand it, LMAO at it. And I can't wait to see how you fulfill your challange! :D

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LOVED that chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

has to be my favourite soo far, i love their banter :wub:

He kinda reminded me of Chandler from friends with all his jokes :lol:

update soon

xxx

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Aden stood at the foot of the stairs waiting for Belle. She had gone up to her room to put on a jacket. He heard footsteps and turned his head. Belle was walking down wearing a hideous green coat. A look of shock and disgust crossed his face.

This is the part in any other Aden/Belle fic where he would be in complete awe at how beautiful she looked. I loved this reaction. So different, and funny. And for some reason, in this fic, I wouldn't have expected anything else.

You've got me intrigued about the lady now.

I liked her naming all the times he's done stupid things.

My favourite part would be how he said he wasn't going to let her down and that she would be the last person he ever wanted to let down.

Please update soon.

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LMAO! Loved it!

The bit the jackets and when Belle listed every event that he had basically ruined was just hilarious! Poor Spike. :lol:

Loved the bit when he told her that she was the last person that he would want to let down :wub:

Hope Belle gets over her hiccups!!

xoxo

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Oh dear I have a horrible feeling that the old balding man who answered the door was the guy that owns the paper.... eek!!

Oh i lovelovelove this fic :wub: you are an absolute star!!

Can't wait for next update :D

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