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“They’ve done a lot of work for this. They’ve cooked a lot of stuff,”

“Anybody we know?” Aden joked, Sally smiled,

So funny.

I like the image of Belle hiding by a pot plant. Hope she gets over her hiccups soon, it is funny though. Also like how nervous she gets at the thought of having converstaions with people.

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LMAO! Belle can't have conversations with people? :lol: Poor girl!

Loved the whole chapter once again! Emma and Rebekah - HILARIOUS! I would love to meet these characters in real life...

Cannot wait for more. I'm still intrigued about the lady in the veil... And I hope Belle gets rid of the hiccups soon. Maybe Aden could frighten her with a kiss or something :P

xoxo

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Thanks guys :). I thought while it's fresh in my mind, I'd let you know a bit about the sequel :)

- At least one character dies

- One character moves to a different country

- A hostage situation takes place

- One character gets engaged

- One character's father dies

- A bomb is set off somewhere in Summer Bay

What do you think? Also, here's a preview of next chapter, which will probably be posted tomorrow :).

In the main hall, Aden was standing near the back of the room, his hands in his pockets. Sally walked over to him. In her hands were two glasses of wine.

“Where’s Belle?” She asked him curiously,

“Mentally speaking, she’s on the fifty-seventh moon off Saturn, which is currently located in the bathroom,” Aden joked. Sally smiled. Aden looked down and saw the drinks in her hand, “Two drinks?” He asked, “Found a friend,” Aden said, sounding slightly impressed.

“I’m cultivating one,” Sally informed her student. She looked over at an attractive man about the same age as her and waved.

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Ooooh the sequel! Now that sounds good! Sad, but good!

Next chapter - lol! How do you keep it all so funny?! Every chapter it's always hilarious! It's great! :D

xoxo

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Sequel sounds good.

I just have two queries, if you don't mind - why is Sally so chummy with her students? It seems very unprofessional, especially the way she talked to Aden & Belle about Rebekah and the other wan; I'm not hugely liking her like that, because - she seems to me like she's trying to run with the cool crowd and being one of them? ...

Also, I don't think she can wave, if she has two glasses of wine :P

keep writing - i want to keep reading? :D

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That's a good question :P. I didn't think about it when I was writing! I think I wrote it because I had the series in mind and everybody knows everybody, so it's not really unprofessional, hope that helps :). She has two drinks because she's in the process of getting a date :P.

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That's a good question :P. I didn't think about it when I was writing! I think I wrote it because I had the series in mind and everybody knows everybody, so it's not really unprofessional, hope that helps :). She has two drinks because she's in the process of getting a date :P.

Ohhh - see, I've never heard of, or seen the series.

Ok, that explains it to me xDD I forgot actually that they weren't all based on who they were from the show :P

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- At least one character dies

Please let it not be Angelo or Melody. Anyone else dying I can deal with. These two are awesome in this fic. Ten times more funnier then even Aden and Belle, some of the time. I have the strangest feeling it's going to be Angelo, hope it's not, it wouldn't be the same without all his stupid plans, and ideas. And as for Mel, I'm gonna pray that what you said a while back about her getting enough scenes in the sequel is still happening. She's hilarious here.

Anyway the sequel sounds good.

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