Taniya_K Posted January 15, 2009 Report Posted January 15, 2009 Loved it as always! Cassie aka Princess Sharni was just hilarious! But poor Aden when she told him all that about Belle The ending was too good. For a moment, I thought they would kiss, but then Belle had to go and be grateful Awesome update as always. Cannot wait for the next storyarch! I'm loving Angelo in this! xoxo Quote
LAURZY! Posted January 16, 2009 Report Posted January 16, 2009 Awww, loved the eneding! you cant tear them apart now!! I'm glad Belle overcame her fears about talking to people!! Brill update as per usual Quote
Jody Posted January 16, 2009 Report Posted January 16, 2009 (edited) I'm gonna review the last two chapters here. I couldn't yesterday because this site was wasn't working properly for me. I am Sharni Szabo, a Hungarian from Hungary, Now that was funny way of using another name on your list. Can't wait for the rest. I like the chapter. Poor Aden, hearing all that from Cassie about him and Belle. It's so funny imagining Aden, Drew, and Cassie being apart of a gang. The Sally and Aden scene was my favourite though. Really funny. I think youre getting the wrong idea about this kiss, Absolutely not! He responded nervously, This is just a thankyou kiss. A goodnight kiss. A kiss between friends, right? He rambled. Belle grinned as she moved in yet again. I knew you were getting the wrong idea, I loved this part. So cute, but at the same time funny. I loved that she made the first move. And seeing him be nervous is so sweet. I also enjoyed that part when a glass cracked and he said that it wasn't his heart and walked off. And how sweet, he helped her overcome her fear. Great chapter. I really enjoyed it. Please update soon. Edited January 16, 2009 by Jody Quote
Taniya_K Posted January 16, 2009 Report Posted January 16, 2009 Awwwwww! 35 chapters later and they're together. And to be honest, it was worth every chapter! I loved how you kept it in tone with the rest of the fic - teasing, funny and sarcastic - but at the same time it was fluffy! I really hope you don't do anything to tear them up! Loved the Cassie/Sharni/Aden bit again. Lol, he caught her out big time! Glad that Belle got to talk to Gavin and the other associates! Hope it all went well for her... Cannot wait for more! xoxo Quote
Taniya_K Posted January 16, 2009 Report Posted January 16, 2009 That was just brill! It was humorous fluff! Poor Aden though! He's only gotten 5 kisses out of her in 4 days! And he's been hurt throughout some of them too And him thinking that she's ashamed of him. I can see where he got that from though. Loved him climbing up the drainpipe and lmao at the pyjama shots! That was just a classic line! Oh Belle, she better not do anything to ruin this! Even their arguments are sweet! I hope that they can take another stop forward soon and be able to enter and exit the same room at the same time. Alone More soon I hope! xoxo Quote
LAURZY! Posted January 16, 2009 Report Posted January 16, 2009 Awww loved it!! Love that he climbed up the drain pipe I hope Belle doesn't ruin it! they're so made for each other lol Cannot wait to read more! Quote
Symphony Posted January 16, 2009 Report Posted January 16, 2009 What's going to happen to separate them?! Poor Aden, I really feel for him with Belle being such a cow to him.... 3 updates to catch up on - I feel spoiled! Quote
Jody Posted January 17, 2009 Report Posted January 17, 2009 (edited) "I mean forgetting to take the pencil out of your mouth at first. You lose points for that," Aden answered with a grin, Forget who forgets to take the the pencil out of her mouth. Who decides to kiss someone who still as a pencil in their mouth? I really liked them talking about all the kisses. So funny. That whole scene was so good. . "You're certifiable?" She asked him, "Yeah, "About me?" "It'll be your name I'm muttering when they take away my shoelaces," Both Belle and Aden smiled, That last line was my favourite of the chapter. How romantic? Seriously, these two have such a weird way of expressing how they feel about each other. I love it. Please update soon. Edited January 17, 2009 by Jody Quote
Jody Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 (edited) 'Lincoln Boulevard?' He asked in disbelief. The man, Lincoln, nodded. "Yeah, but everyone calls me 'Bull'" He announced. Geoff fought back laughter. "Short for Lincoln, right?" He joked. Lincoln nodded, "'Spose so," He agreed before walking around the newsroom, looking at ever member of staff. You're getting really creative with the names. I liked the scene. Another funny one. Seriously, there was no part in this chapter that didn't make me laugh. Lincoln and Angelo was so funny. So the big imtimidating guy tripped on a pink rabbit suit. I liked Geoff, and especially Belle's reaction to Lincoln wanting to kill Angelo. Belle's overreaction, in the meeting, to the whistling was hilarious. As well as Geoff's explanation to Jo about it. Also the one about why he found her spraining her arm funny. Belle certainly doesn't know how to be secretive, does she? The Aden and Belle scene was good too. Loved that it turned out to be a shopping list. Edited January 18, 2009 by Jody Quote
LAURZY! Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 You got lincoln in!! Loved it Someone came to kill Angelo, for a moment i thought all my prayers had been answered!! I loved it all, seriously so funny, i cant just pick one bit out Brill update Quote
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