Taniya_K Posted January 18, 2009 Report Posted January 18, 2009 Angelo! So glad that he didn't get killed by 'Bull' but that whole ending was just hilarious! Esp the way he spoke so proudly as if he had actually over-powered him, but it was all down to the rabbit suits. Aden and Belle - again! Esp Belle! That girl really has no sense of subtlety, does she?! Geoff was a comic like always. Loved the whole thing about Belle and Spike pretending they're not dating and they're pretending that they don't know. And her spraining her wrist! Cannot wait for more! Loving the longer chapters!! xoxo Quote
Symphony Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 angelo cracks me up - rabbit suits - that's brilliant that lincoln tripped over them - lovelovelove it as always i just loved the whole chapter; i so want to check out this series after reading this fan fic!!! morrreee ;) Quote
Taniya_K Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Lol, poor Aden! He really wants to sort things out with them, but Belle isn't budgin about becoming public, is she?! Loved the Angelo/Jessie stuff! Poor guy! I wonder who she is though!! She did know a rather lot about him! Can't wait for more! xoxo Quote
Jody Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 The Angelo/Jessie stuff sounds okay. But I have to say, wasn't really a fan of their scenes. I don't know, it just didn't grab my attention. But the idea of her was good. Poor Aden. With all the physical pain he as had to go through so far in his relationship with Belle. Please update soon. Quote
Symphony Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 who on earth is this jessie?! I'm not liking Belle >.< she's such a cow like oh my god! i know she's based on this wan from the series but like, oh my god. if she doesn't want spike, i'll have him thanks for the update! Quote
Luc Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Jessie is an original character I've made for this . Is that what you meant ? Anyway, I'll update later on, I'm having trouble starting the next chapter. Quote
Symphony Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Jessie is an original character I've made for this . Is that what you meant ? Anyway, I'll update later on, I'm having trouble starting the next chapter. Oh, lol, no ;) I just meant who on earth is she like where did she come from and how does she know so much about angelo Quote
Luc Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Oh, okay . Just to point out, Jessie has a point, which I refered to subtly in the last chapter Quote
LAURZY! Posted January 19, 2009 Report Posted January 19, 2009 Angelo has a mini stalker lmao very funny!! Awww poor Aden!! lol Brll update, cant wait to read more Quote
Jody Posted January 22, 2009 Report Posted January 22, 2009 Actually I enjoyed this chapter more than the last. I felt the Jessie/Angelo stuff was much better here. From the scene with Lincoln to the end. I love that we are getting to see another side to Angelo. And I think it written very well. I like how he was so concerned yet still himself. Absent minded, he looked around to see if there were any rabbit suits available. Funniest line of chapter. I liked that whole scene with Lincoln. Funny stuff. It was so weird seeing Aden and Belle act so cheerful together, and in front of people too. Maybe Belle is slowly getting used too all this. Quote
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