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Awww, Angelo :wub: he's so helpful.. Belle can't kill him, okay?

As for Liza, lol! that was a great bit..poor Aden :lol: and I won't mention the grief Drew went through, nor the poor confused readers who have never heard of those star signs >they'll think hes mad! although shouldn't he know his stuff, then again it is Drew -_- lol

As for Ruby, Is she above a NB..after all she did lose her chair...and her desk :rolleyes:

awesome update

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Thankss guys :D.

I'm in the midde of writing the next chapter, so I thought I'd give you a preview.

Belle entered the newsroom. It was 5am, and the Coastal Junior team had two days until the first edition. She advanced towards her desk, passing Ruby, Geoff and Aden, she glanced down towards a small wooden box, ‘Belle’s Swear Box’ was written across it in red marker, she glanced across at Geoff who grinned. Belle pulled out a handful of silver coins and inserted a few into the box,

“Belle, what did you think of my article?” Ruby called out from her typewriter,

“Oh, right,” Belle said, she stuck her hand into her pocket and pulled out some more coins and put a few more into the box, “It needs work,” She said croakily,

“Is it true your swear box takes MasterCard?” Aden asked, Belle glanced at him angrily,

“I’m thinking of habits I want to kick,” She said, pulling out a notepad and looking over it,

“Jo’s coming!” Cassie called out from the door; Belle looked up in horror, trying to remember where the phone was,

“Where’s the phone?” Belle asked,

“In my desk drawer,” Geoff told her, she glanced towards the door nervously...

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Wow, Now Annie's onboard, lol but she lied about being Belle's sister...I think I like this Annie.

As for Angelo, I'm sure he will do something to stop Belle killing him..(hint,hint).

Can't wait for more, it will be interesting to see what they get to print XD.

“You must have been born whilst I was out,” Belle said harshly, the young girl grinned,

“I've always told mum that you need to spend more time at home,” She shot back, Belle grinned, impressed.

Now that was an awesome quote, looks like Annie's no NB

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I read this but yet I cant find a reply from me :blink: Bad Jane, Loved the update. Poor Aden, lol but the council lady grouchy now. Belle is soo good at pissing off the council isn't she? lol

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