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I read it XD, it was awesome. Man Aden mean :angry: lol but moving on from that, its all very interesting. So something happened Monday night? but we don't know yet? if so it made prefect sense. Can't wait for more.

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Roccoluver, you're right, something has happened on Monday night :).

Also, to understand the next chapter, which I'm working on, you have to pay attention to something Angelo says in chapter three :).

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Wow, the whole mood of the story has changed so much since I last read it. I could picture the Angelo scene before he found out Ric was dead, one of those situations wheres its like lmao thats so stupid-hang on why is everyone so sad-omg hes dead!

As for Belle leaving :( but I can understand why, the guilt that she must has :(

R.I.P Ric

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Thanks for the replies guys :)

Here's a quick preview of the next chapter, it should be up sometime this week...

Geoff grimly looked down at a piece of paper in his hands. He was reading through it for what seemed to be the millionth time.

“She’s not coming back,” Angelo whispered to him softly. He had a rolled up piece of paper in his hand, Geoff glanced at it and chuckled for a brief moment, Aden glanced at the boy furiously.

“Everybody gather round!” Geoff called out from Belle’s desk. On it was her typewriter, her swearbox, and the remains of a Garfield plush toy. Slowly, the entire newsroom was surrounding him, all talking over one another, “Quiet!” He yelled, nobody paid him any attention,

“Shut up!” Aden shouted. The newsroom soon became silent,

“Before you ask, I don’t know when Belle’s coming back,” He said gloomily, watching the group,

“It’s been three days, Geoff,” Lucas called out from the graphics room, he was standing next to Cassie, Belle and another blonde girl,

“I know,” He told Lucas calmly, Cassie shook her head,

“She hasn’t even been at school!” She informed Geoff

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