Luc Posted October 21, 2008 Report Posted October 21, 2008 Thanks guys I'm writing chapter twelve now, so I thought I'd give you a preview... The newsroom was bustling with people now. Some were sitting at desks with typewriters in front of them; others were sleeping whilst a few were walking around. Belle walked into the graphics room and pulled open the top drawer of Melody’s desk. In it was a sheet of bright red paper with the words ‘Go Away Belle’ written across it in black marker, Belle ignored this and opened two more of her desk draws, and scoffed when she saw the same thing in them. “Go away, Belle,” Melody’s voice said from behind her, Belle could tell she was frustrated. Slowly she turned around to face the young blonde. Also, I started writing a future chapter at school today, and I want to get your opinion on what you think. The chapter will be called 'The Rest of My Life' “Please!” A young woman’s voice screamed out. It was loud, yet faint and slightly muffled. He stirred a little, “Can anybody help me?” She pleaded, the boy stirred again. “What?” He muttered without opening his eyes. His voice was croaky and hushed, he fell silent again. “Can you hear me? I can hear you?” She called out again. The boy lay still, not making a noise. “Can somebody please help me?” She sounded close to tears as she pleaded for assistance. The young boy stirred again, but his eyes remained closed tightly. What do you think? Quote
Luc Posted October 27, 2008 Report Posted October 27, 2008 Okay, I know, I'm terrible, I haven't updated in ages, and I'm not now . I've got a bad case of writers block . So here's another preview of the next chapter... The newsroom flicked on, illuminating the grimy and decrepit building. Belle walked in, she was wearing a pair of striped pyjamas. Slowly, she walked over to the graphics room and opened the door. Belle sighed as she looked across at a podium, on it as a stack of paper and a brass plaque reading ‘To Print’. She walked over to it and pulled out a black marker, she make a strike through it half-heartedly, ‘How the Coastal Junior Saved an Icon’ was the headline. Belle through the page aside and placed another strike through the next one ‘Wellside Saved!’ was the headline. Quote
xknomex Posted October 27, 2008 Report Posted October 27, 2008 I thought you updated! The next chapter looks good!!! Update soon oh and your not terrible.! xx Quote
Deborah Posted October 27, 2008 Report Posted October 27, 2008 Hope you get over your writers block soon. Previews look good, wondering what Belle is doing in her pyjamas in the newsroom! Also the young woman & boy sound intriguing & Melody with the go away Belle notes is funny! Quote
Deborah Posted October 29, 2008 Report Posted October 29, 2008 Good update, love the last bit especially with the rabbits, made me laugh a lot. Quote
xknomex Posted October 29, 2008 Report Posted October 29, 2008 Brilliant chapter! haha at the Rabbits being named Belle and Aden Update soon x Quote
meant2live Posted October 29, 2008 Report Posted October 29, 2008 This was worth the wait... that last part cracked me up... aww I want aden adn belle bunnies now This was awesome... loved it... belles so demanding how shes got everyone workin at this time of night... and oooh whats in the box... and hasn't angelo been fired yet? lol more soon Quote
Taniya_K Posted October 29, 2008 Report Posted October 29, 2008 LMAO at the end. I really don't want to know what Annie sees! Loved it. I hope things get better at the paper soon! xoxo Quote
Luc Posted November 7, 2008 Report Posted November 7, 2008 Thanks for the comments guys ! I know this isn;t an update, it's just a preview, but I'm going in between two fics at the moment, but a new chapter should be up sometime this weekend, if not tonight ! Belle was standing next to Geoff in front of Ruby’s desk. Her face was red and her eyes were narrowed in anger, “We’re going to need a ton of new material!” She moaned, ripping out pages from her notepad, “Do you think I could fire Melody for something?” She asked Geoff half hopefully, half curiously, “Why don’t we just publish a day late?” Geoff suggested, steering away from the topic of Melody, “You know what it does for sales,” the girl informed him, rolling her eyes, “Did you promise her a night off?” She shot at the deputy editor. He folded his arms across his chest. “I promised a lot of things,” He argued, moving closer to Ruby, “I was persuading people!” He added. Belle sighed. “I really think I should fire her for something,” She told him before turning to her best friend “Rubes, did you phone Donna Green?” Quote
meant2live Posted November 7, 2008 Report Posted November 7, 2008 Oooh interesting lol Cant wait to see the whole chapter Quote
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