LAURZY! Posted November 28, 2008 Report Posted November 28, 2008 2 updates?? what've we done to deserve that?? lol Angelo needs to do one oooo, the flashbacks were intriguing!! what happened?? Loved it Quote
Luc Posted November 30, 2008 Report Posted November 30, 2008 (edited) Thanks Laurzy . Okay, I've been writting almost non-stop for the last few days and nearly have the next chapter done. It is a bit confusing, but it explains a lot. Here's a preview... “Oh, there’s something else. You see this,” She began, pointing down to the wooden face that was resting in her left hand. “It’s unique. There’s only one of these in the whole world. And this isn’t it!” “What?” Amanda asked, confused. She looked at her daughter, waiting for more explanation. “Impossible, right?” Belle asked. Amanda nodded in agreement. She still looked deeply confused. Also, I've been writting the last few chapters, as I mentioned in my last update, so I thought I'd give you a preview... ““We’ve all been following this dopey love affair since page one!” Annie explained, “You’re part of everyone’s lives now. There are rabbits named after you for God’s sake! Watch this,” She added, pointing to a sleeping reporter. Annie nudged her, “Aden,” She said. The reporter opened her eyes, “Belle,” She replied instantly, “See,” Annie said to Belle smugly. A look of anger crossed Belle’s face. “Go back to sleep!” She yelled at the reporter before walking over to Drew, a few sheets of paper clutched in her hand. Annie followed her again. “We’re all hanging in there for the happy ending!” She said sadly, “The traditional way,” She smiled at Drew. Edited November 30, 2008 by Luc Quote
meant2live Posted December 1, 2008 Report Posted December 1, 2008 Belle makes me laugh, even young Belle was funny. "it's my birthday today?" "no it's not!" loved it. And ooh looks interesting. cannot wait for more Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 1, 2008 Report Posted December 1, 2008 oooo im really intrigued now!! How if there was only one of them made did she have it years ago??? hmmm... Really cant wait to read more!! Quote
meant2live Posted December 1, 2008 Report Posted December 1, 2008 huh? Confusedness. My guess that lady is the lady that had her house burgled and she gave Belle a statue similar to it when she was little when she got lost. But I'm starting to think that Belle had an obsession with someone called Jasper I want to know things more please Quote
Jody Posted December 3, 2008 Report Posted December 3, 2008 I don't think I've reviewed this story before but I've been reading it since it started. I love how different this is to most fanfics here. Belles my favourite. Love how angry she seems to get most of the time over the littliest things. It's like everyones always waiting for her to snap. Poor Angelo I've lost count of the amount of times shes threatenned to kill him. Jealous Belle is awesome. It's funny watching her pretend she doesn't want Aden. Also funny is the way she keeps wanting to fire Melody. I was completely shocked when Ric died. Also love Angelo in this fic. He is just such an idiot(can't think of a better word that describes him). But a really funny one. I'm always feel like laughing when he in a scene. My favorite scene of his lately was when he went to threaten Aden but was getting scared himself. Annie is so much more likable here then on the show. Liked her entrance. Ruby and Belle being bestfriends. I like that. I love Ruby. We don't see enough of her in fanfic. So it's good to see so much of her here. Then theres Aden. Love how witty he is. He scenes with Angelo are hilarious. Love all the flirty comments to Belle. Love all the Adelle bits. Please update soon. Quote
Jody Posted December 4, 2008 Report Posted December 4, 2008 (edited) I ran away! She laughed. You stayed and apologised. She laughed. Geoff and Belle have a nice little friendship going on in this fic. Bartlett was a clever one this chapter. Funny as well. And good for Belle, finally figuring everything out. Another thing that I like about this story is that the characters are so different from the show that I'm liking characters I usually don't(Drew, Bartlett, Annie, Geoff). Update soon. Edited December 4, 2008 by enjoy the ride Quote
LAURZY! Posted December 4, 2008 Report Posted December 4, 2008 Yeah, i agree with Enjoy The Ride - i love Geoff and Belle's relationship in this! Awww, glad Belle's sorted it out!! Loved it Quote
meant2live Posted December 4, 2008 Report Posted December 4, 2008 Loved it... it was awesome. Young Geoff and Belle make me giggle. Glad the old lady still remembered Belle... sorry Jasper lol. Can't wait for more Quote
Taniya_K Posted December 4, 2008 Report Posted December 4, 2008 Caught up on the last few chapters... Loving the flachbacks. Geoff and Belle younger are funny. Glad they found out why Belle had that carving! 'Jasper' still makes me laugh! Can't wait for more! xoxo Quote
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