The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[Taniya_K]

Okie dokester! *waits patiently*

[xknomex]

*tear* that must have been horrible for Aden but I am so proud of him.

and poor poor Annie, having to answer the questions.

Your writing is amazing!!

cant wait till the next chapter.

Update soon.

xxx

[Jody]

Poor Annie and Aden.

You describe how sick Annie must feel so well. And you write Aden perfectly. Annie must be even more confused now with Aden's reaction.

[Taniya_K]

Poor Aden and Annie! Gosh, the way you described the way he felt, and how sick she was too... so great!

Can't wait for more.

[LAURZY!]

WOW that was so moving, the way you wrote both adens thoughts and annies reactions was just..wow!!!

Fantastic update

[wrongturntaken]

WOW! I'm nearly in tears! That was so beautiful, and Aden's reaction and why he couldn't help her was so heartbreaking! I'm glad Annie realised how distressed he was and i can't wait to see the other's reactions! Please update soon!

As in maybe tonight again???

[Aden+Belle forever]

That was great, but poor Annie, and poor Aden

It was such an emotional chapter, I cant wait to read more

[Taniya_K]

Poor Geoff! But I actually laughed when Belle yelled at him [wrong I know ]

But another great chapter! I hope they don't get the wrong idea when they find Aden and Annie, although they're heading home and I'm sure that Annie would correct them, right?

More soon!

[xknomex]

poor Belle, Geoff and Irene.

Love that Roman takes charge of the situation.

cant wait to see Belle,Geoff and Irene's reaction to what happened to Annie. I hope they don't blame Aden!

[Aden+Belle forever]

Please let them find them

LOL at Roman taking charge of the situation, just like in the army

Once again, please let them find them, please update soon, I cant wait to see what happens next