The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[wrongturntaken]

It's funny, cos people keep saying 'wow' and after reading the first chapter, that was all i could think to say too!

Seriously... WOW!

The writing and the way you are capturing Aden and Belle's emotions is fantastic, i like the reasoning behind the way they're feeling too! It makes a lot of sense! I am really looking forward to your next update!

[lucylinda]

This has to be the best piece of writing I've read on this site,

It's not cliched, not overwritten and yet you manage to capture the emotions magically. I will definately continue reading this one.

Congratulations on producing such an amazing piece of writing, I wish you luck with all your future writing.

[whispered_envy]

I agree with lucylinda. The writings rings true for the characters...you know how to write them, and you do it well! Great first two chapters.

Edited September 26, 2008 by whispered_envy

[mk1diva]

omg the way you capture the characters emoitions are brilliant

I just wanna give everyone a hug after them 2 chapters lol

please update again soon...

[maccaz]

Good writing so far. Update ASAP.

[mk1diva]

o god the way you described those nightmares were heartbreaking but so good! I love the cheek with Bartlett!

O no is this the talk Cassie gives the class? more heartbreak for Aden?

[wrongturntaken]

Chapter 3.

I have never read anyone describe Aden's abuse in such an incredible way... the way you switched between tenses must have been really difficult to do but you completely made it work... Aden's nightmare and unsure whether he was 6 or 17 was so moving, you literally had me crying...

You are an amazing writer because you have made me completely feel for the characters and what they are going through, especially Aden...

Chapter 4.

You made me completely understand what was going on with Belle and why she made that decision!

Completely EXCELLENT writing!!!!!!!!

I CANNOT WAIT for the next update!

[Taniya_K]

Wow!

Just read the last two chapters. I loev how you write Aden and Belle seperately to give it more effect.

My favourite bit just has to be

His demons were like vampires, he used the sun to ward them off.

That's just a brilliant metaphore for him.

Please update soon.

xoxo

[Aden+Belle forever]

2 Excellent updates

Please update soon

[mk1diva]

wow another great update date this is so well written please keep it coming...