The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[Aden+Belle forever]

Another great chapter, I love Annie/Jai pairings

[Taniya_K]

Forget about the lack of Aden... well don't actually... but what I mean is that THAT was just awesome! I'm so glad that Annie didn't get hurt!

Can't wait for more!

xoxo

[wrongturntaken]

Great update! (even if it was Aden-less ) only joking... well... as much as one can joke about an Aden-less life.

Anway, can't wait for the next update!!! (All your updates are fantastic, not just the Aden ones! Just so you know!)

[LAURZY!]

Another great update,

loved the Jai/Annie interaction

[whispered_envy]

I wish you weren't in a different timezone monkeysmoke...you always update when I'm asleep!

Geoff was so cute wanting to find Annie like that- you can tell he loves her so much. I'm glad Irene believes Aden is innocent- I wonder if Belle will talk to Aden about Annie?

Good Annie/Jai interaction...love the hysterical laughing part...it's what I would do too!

Can't wait for more!

[MissOlivia22]

Update soon ??

[Taniya_K]

I didn't think that was poorly written at all! I loved it! It really stayed true to the characters, even Nicole's snide remarks lol!

Hope Aden doesn't stay on the beach again... maybe he could go crash in Belle's room? Hehehe

More soon please?

xoxo

[LAURZY!]

That wasn't poorly written at all!!!

I agree with Taniya, he cant stay on the beach and he should sneak through Belle's window - j/k im sure whatever you write next will be great

Great update

[xknomex]

that was brilliantly written not poorly written!!!!

Love Nicole in this fic! Cant wait to see what happens next.

yep agree Tanyia Belles window is a great idea!!!!

xx

[wrongturntaken]

That was really good! Lovin the way you've portrayed Nicole! Especially the way she was being with Aden!

Great job! Please update soon!! please please please!!!!!