The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[whispered_envy]

What more can I say that hasn't already been said by everyone else? How you write Nicole feels very true to the character...I hope Aden doesn't stay away from Roman thinking he would want more space to be with Niolce now shes turned up...it's obvious Aden needs Roman! Anyway...can't wait for the next part!

[SAM27#]

I agree with everyone else that was a great chapter!!!!! And that Aden should crash at Belles!!

Aww I thought it was so cute how Roman feels proud and love for his daughter despite not knowing her fully!!!!! So cute!!!!

Can't wait for more

[MissOlivia22]

Oh no! Aden most likely won't want to get in the way of Roman and Nicole.... Just when Roman was kind of starting to get his trust.

Update soon !!! Please

[Taniya_K]

Hehe! Loved Jai's 'Rocky' comment! But I can't belive Geoff hit him! LMAO I would love to see that!

Even without Aden, this chapter rocked. Your chapter always rock... but that's not the point. Miles and Kirsty at the beginning was sweet and then funny about Jai and Annie!

Cannot wait for more!

xoxo

[xknomex]

Loved the chapter, you dont need to apologize about there being know Aden, its your fic you can put who you want in it

ahaha I would love to see Geoff punch Jai in a dressing gown.

Miles and kirsty were cute, now why cant they be like that in the real show?

Update soon.

xxx

[wrongturntaken]

That was great! Played out like a real scene! Can you just clear something up for me though, has Sally left the bay in this fic? I assume she has but i just wanted to make sure...

BTW, if you don't start putting Aden into EVERY SINGLE chapter, i am going to stop reading this story!!

(THAT WAS A JOKE! I WOULD NEVER EVER DO THAT!!! EVERY BIT OF IT IS TOO DARN GOOD TO NOT READ!!!!!!)

But since you can probably tell i'm an Aden fan, any chance of another update tonight (with Aden)?????

No pressure, i just seriously love your story!! And i've had a pretty bad day so maybe you could cheer me up?!?!?!?

[monkeysmoke]

That was great! Played out like a real scene! Can you just clear something up for me though, has Sally left the bay in this fic? I assume she has but i just wanted to make sure...

BTW, if you don't start putting Aden into EVERY SINGLE chapter, i am going to stop reading this story!!

(THAT WAS A JOKE! I WOULD NEVER EVER DO THAT!!! EVERY BIT OF IT IS TOO DARN GOOD TO NOT READ!!!!!!)

But since you can probably tell i'm an Aden fan, any chance of another update tonight (with Aden)?????

No pressure, i just seriously love your story!! And i've had a pretty bad day so maybe you could cheer me up?!?!?!?

to be honest i hadn't really decided whether to keep sally in or not. she can't really live with Miles, Kirty and Alf, aor work at the school so i guess she has left! lol.

and just for you there will be a small aden scene up in a few minutes... (flattery will get you everywhere)

xx

[xknomex]

Yay!!!! an Aden scene.

*jumps up and down*

xxxx

*calms self down*

[LAURZY!]

Loved the adenless chapter! but i realy really loved the Aden chapter Aden is so sweet, and Belle just wont be able to resist him soon enough

Great writing as per with both chapters

Thankyou very much for updating again

[xknomex]

oh Aden...

I feel so proud of him!!! the way he was calm with Geoff but getting through to him!

I wonder if the thing that he is showing Annie is the place that he was sitting at the beginning of the fic when Belle ran into him. (or was that another fic? sorry there are so many i cant remember what happened in them all.)

I hope the next chapter is an Annie/Aden aol moment.

Update soon

xxx