The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[wrongturntaken]

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! You realise now you've done that once, i will be using it every night?? lol.

No seriously, that was an awesome chapter! I loved how Annie was more trusting of Aden than Geoff and how calm Aden was to Geoff in comparison to what he usually is. Even though the characters are behaving quite differently to what i would have imagined at this stage in the show, you've developed them so well from the beginning of your fic that their behaviour is a perfect reflection of the situations they are finding themselves in. I liked how Belle was pleased to see it was Aden, Annie was with.

Aden/Belle interaction in the next chapter perhaps?

Update again soon? tomorrow... tonight... now???????? sorry to nag but it's your own fault for being so good!

seriously though, just update when you have time... and if that happens to be now, then so be it... (sorry i really can't stop myself!)

[MissOlivia22]

flattery will get you everywhere

Really..... XD

Well, your brilliant did you know. completely and utterly brilliant. A fantastic writer and the nicest person on the planet.....

XD

Lovely chapter, I love how Aden managed to calm Geoff down and get him to let go of Annie.. Update soon !

[Taniya_K]

Gosh that was brilliant! Love the softer Aden! So adorable. I love how Annie wanted to be with him rather than Geoff right then. I wonder what he wants to show her!?

Can't wait for more, you're an absolutely brilliant, perfect, awesome writer [yes, I saw that comment up there... ]

xoxo

[monkeysmoke]

oh Aden...

I feel so proud of him!!! the way he was calm with Geoff but getting through to him!

I wonder if the thing that he is showing Annie is the place that he was sitting at the beginning of the fic when Belle ran into him. (or was that another fic? sorry there are so many i cant remember what happened in them all.)

I hope the next chapter is an Annie/Aden aol moment.

Update soon

xxx

Yes that did happen in this one! Wow, feels like i wrote that ages ago! As to your question i can neither confirm or deny your suspicions. xx

[Aden+Belle forever]

Chapter 41 – Cute chapter, loved how Nicole reacted to the diner LOL

Chapter 42 – Poor Miles, he tries so hard. Wonder what Jai and Annie will do next ?

Chapter 43 – loved that chapter, Aden was so sweet to Annie protecting her from Geoff. I feel a little sorry for Geoff as well

Please update soon

[monkeysmoke]

Chapter 41 – Cute chapter, loved how Nicole reacted to the diner LOL

Chapter 42 – Poor Miles, he tries so hard. Wonder what Jai and Annie will do next ?

Chapter 43 – loved that chapter, Aden was so sweet to Annie protecting her from Geoff. I feel a little sorry for Geoff as well

Please update soon

hey thanks for the detailed comments again!

i know, i feel bad for Geoff. I keep portraying him as either really irritating or as the comedy element! So sorry to all Geoff fans!

xxx

[xknomex]

ooops sorry

Edited October 15, 2008 by xknomex

[Taniya_K]

*tear*

Gosh that was just so beautiful! I love how you haven't made Annie really naive and that she understood what he meant. Loved the ending. So cute her taking his hand for his comfort...!

Cannot wait for more!

xoxo

[LAURZY!]

that was sooo sweet, and so brilliantly written!

Loved the ending

[xknomex]

sorry about my last post dont know what happened.

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*tear* Wow that was amazing!!! You are such an amazing writer, you capture the characters emotions so well.

Just to get this straight in my mind, does Annie now know what happened to Aden?

I love that Aden has respect for Geoff and let Annie know that.

I hope Annie tells Belle about how amazing Aden is then Belle can thank him and then they can fall in love.

Update soon

xx