The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[Aden+Belle forever]

Another brilliant chapter, loved it

So sweet between Aden and Annie, they interact so well together

[Aden+Belle forever]

I hope Annie tells Belle about how amazing Aden is then Belle can thank him and then they can fall in love.

That sounds good

[wrongturntaken]

Okay, so i thought your writing was at it's best before but you just sky rocketed in this chapter! That was seriously wow! I was close to tears at the end!!!

He didn't look at her; instead he stared out into the ocean, avoiding her gaze, and her question. "I like to come here to escape from the world." He admitted feebly, "When it gets too much, it's easier to look out at the world when it can't look back at you, somehow, it makes it easier to make sense of everything."

I know this is really weird but i wasn't feeling too great today and i went and stood in a cupboard, (that's really not as strange as it sounds... my flat mates and i were messing around in it yesterday but the way you described that bit it just made me think that that could have been the reason behind it, so i guess... thanks! (I'm not crazy i swear!)

She gazed at him, and this time he looked up to meet it. Suddenly the hidden weight unveiled itself. She read a meaning, a story in his eyes. One she didn't need to know the full tale of to recognise. It was another connect the dots, more complex this time. Silent tears ran tracks down her face as she linked all the clues together in her mind. She could read him now for the same reasons he could read her. There wasn't a complete story, but he gave away enough for her to understand him.

This bit was my favourite bit, im in awe of how you captured both the character's emotions so well and i love that there was no dialogue between them for them both to understand. Absolutely beautiful!

Update soon! Please (Aden again maybe?? Or if you want to write Miles/Kirsty or the other characters maybe you could have Aden in the same scene??? lol, ...whatever happens in your next chapter, i can't wait!)

I just read this review back and realised a couple of things:

1. I'm a complete nutcase, i swear i do know it is really weird and strange to go and stand randomly in a cupboard.

and 2. I am completely obsessed with Aden (probably in this fic even more so than i am in the actual show... credit to your writing i guess!) ;)

[whispered_envy]

^ I've stood in cupboards before, so you're not that strange!

Anyway, onto the fic- that last chapter was simply beautiful. I'm glad Annie sort of understand what's going on with Aden now, even if she doesn't know the full story behind it. I love the friendship that these two have in the fic- they're so different, but so connected! And aww at Geoff trying to be protective of Annie- I love his strong bond with her too!

I think I might go back to the start and read this fic from the beginning- it's just that good!

[monkeysmoke]

In response to wrongturntaken

it's not that crazy only joking where do you think i got the idea? Although i've never used a cupboard before, usually mine are all too full of crap!

xxx

Edited October 16, 2008 by monkeysmoke

[MissOlivia22]

Nosey Nicole.....

And Belle's got lots of questions...

Update soon !!!!! (cos you are the most lovely, nicest best writer in the whole entire world) XD

[LAURZY!]

Brill update

Dont like nicole at all!! lol

Now this is the time where belle goes to help aden and they can fall in love, have babies and live happily ever after - i'm right arent i??? lmao, just kiddin

Cant wait to read more

[monkeysmoke]

Just so you know i edited the last chapter as reading it back i realised i missed out a line which meant Belle walked away for no reason. Nothing that interesting, just didn't make sense without it!

xx

[xknomex]

Brilliant Update as usual.

Really liked Nicole in that chapter.

Update soon

xx

[Taniya_K]

Lol at Nicole. She's funny. I just hope she doesn't try to get Aden!

I hope Belle gets to talk to Aden soon, but I've got a feeling that if she does, it's not gonna be fluffy stuff, will it?

Update soon, please?!!!!!!

xoxo