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HOW COULD YOU BE THAT EVIL!!?!?!?!?!?!????? THAT WAS JUST MEAN!!!!!!! Right NOW, you have to update NOW!!! (even though i know you don't usually update at this time, but if by some miracle you are able to, then please please please do!

That was a great chapter anyway, i loved Aden's response to the scene and how Irene was with him. You once again got the reactions of all of the characters absolutely perfect!!!!!!

I really want to see this Aden/Belle interaction!!!!! Pretty pretty please!!!!????? :D

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Chapter 45- I really love how you write Nicole...it's so...Nicole! :lol: Liked the Belle/Roman interaction as well. :)

Chapter 46- Aww, I'm so glad that Irene properly apologised to Aden...I wonder what Belle's going to say to him?

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That is EVIL!!!!! At least we don't have to wait too long for some Adelle interaction!!!!

Another couple of great chapters!! Can't wait for more!!

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You EVIL person!!! How could you leave it there!!! Its bad enough we have to wait a whole weekend for the reunion and now you stopped the chapter there!!! i cant cope with all the waiting!

please please update soon!!!! with Adelleness !

xxxx

Loved the chapter by the way! :D

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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! :wub:

Gosh, you write Adelle so perfectly! I hope you keep on writing them like this. I love how you explained Aden's feelings about her as he began to realise them and how he would do anything for her... that last paragraph just made me AOL.

Lol at Belle immediately thinking of Amanda when Aden had said all that.

Please update soon!

xoxo

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Yay! an Adelle chapter! whoop. :D

I loved that it was like a fluff sandwhich. started off serious then had some fluff and then finished serious. perfect!

The way you wrote Adens emotions was brilliant! your such an amazing writer!

cant wait till the next chapter :D

xoxoxo

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Yay! an Adelle chapter! whoop. :D

I loved that it was like a fluff sandwhich. started off serious then had some fluff and then finished serious. perfect!

haha a fluff sandwich. that's funny. that should be an actual writing term!

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