The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[Taniya_K]

But isn't Kirsty like 21/22 [well, at least in her early 20s] and Aden's 19? That can't be possible, right?

[xknomex]

^ haha

good point!

[wrongturntaken]

Great chapter! I had the same feeling as Taniya, i hope we're right as it would be very interesting to see how you handled that!

Can't wait for more!

Please update soon! Again tonight??

[Aden+Belle forever]

Great chapter, poor Ollie

My initial thoughts were that Belle would be a match, dont know why though

Please update soon

[Inactive User]

I loved catching up with the previous chapters you posted, mate Update soon. Hope Ollie will be okay.

[Taniya_K]

Whoa. That was just so... whoa! I love how Nicole's words with Roman were just the same as his brother's with Larry. Gosh, that was just a powerful chapter...

I really can't write more cos I'm still getting my head around it.

Can't wait for more!

xoxo

[LAURZY!]

Wow, that was really moving! i dont quite know what to write to give it justice to be honest.

Loved how Nicole's convo with Roman was the same as the one Aden was thinking about, that was a great idea

Really really great update, thanks

[wrongturntaken]

WOW! I loved what you did with Aden's dream and the present time, it worked so well! and was so sad!

I can't wait for the next update, like i usually can't! lol

Please make it soon!!!!

[Inactive User]

Whoa it's really a great and moving chapter. Loved it. I can't wait for the next update too, lol. Update soon please!!!

[xknomex]

WOW Another brilliant chapter!! The Dream was brilliantly written. My poor Aden

This Roman and Nicole stuff is great !

Update soon

xxx