The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[Taniya_K]

Wow! Poor Miles!

And no, Aden didn't come across out of character. In fact, I think I just fell in love with him all over again! That quote was perfectly used [i had to study King Lear a couple of years back. Hated it tbh].

Liked Miles' astonishment at the fact that Aden got tested for Ollie. Sweet, but kinda sad too.

Cannot wait for more.

xoxo

[LAURZY!]

That was so good!

I dont think Aden seemed out of charachter cos i've always though he was deeper than what the show portrayed him as. And i agree with Taniya, it kinda makes you fall for him even more lol

Great update

[MissOlivia22]

Awwww..... Aden got tested. How cute XD Lol, Update soon

[Aden+Belle forever]

I didnt think Aden was out of character at all, you write him quite well

I felt sorry for Miles, but glad that Aden got tested

Please update soon

[xknomex]

Aden didn't seem out of charecter at all. I just love him even more now.

I loved how you used the quote.

Loved the Miles/Aden interaction

Update soon

xxx

Edited October 23, 2008 by xknomex

[Inactive User]

Loved the last twp chapters. They are brilliant and well-written. Update soon

[wrongturntaken]

AW! That was AMAZING! I loved how you structured Miles' behaviour like that, it was really hard hitting and i thought what you did with Aden worked really well, i could see him behaving like that in that kind of situation... it was such a brilliant way to tell us that he got tested!

I wanna read more, update soon! Now? PLEASE!!!!

[whispered_envy]

I don't think that was out of character, I think it was a brilliant way to show us how Aden can have moments, like everybody can! The way you write Miles is so convincing and believeable, too! Great stuff!

[LAURZY!]

That was great, Nicole is hilarious

Fantastic update, loved it

[Taniya_K]

How could you leave it there?! What happened? It's got something to do with Ollie, right?

But, anyway, LMAO at Nicole and Belle. Loved Aden's classic quip! Lol at them turning red. Hehehe, yeah they're so not doing a good job at that!

More sooooooon please!

xoxo