The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[wrongturntaken]

WOW! Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOO much for those updates!

I think you ought to quit whatever job you do have and become a professional writer, because you are seriously that good unless you are actuallyl a professional writer, in which case; don't quit!

The scene with Larry and Aden was AMAZING! I could see every aspect of it playing out exactly the right way for the characters, i like that Aden seemed indifferent to him at first and then gradually had the confidence to confront Larry and you described his reaction so well!

I really really really really cannot wait for the next update! No joke, i am literally going to be checking every 5 minutes to see if you've updated! That's just how good this is!

:D

[monkeysmoke]

WOW! Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOO much for those updates!

I think you ought to quit whatever job you do have and become a professional writer, because you are seriously that good unless you are actuallyl a professional writer, in which case; don't quit!

The scene with Larry and Aden was AMAZING! I could see every aspect of it playing out exactly the right way for the characters, i like that Aden seemed indifferent to him at first and then gradually had the confidence to confront Larry and you described his reaction so well!

I really really really really cannot wait for the next update! No joke, i am literally going to be checking every 5 minutes to see if you've updated! That's just how good this is!

:D

Aw, thats so sweet, I wish I could get someone to pay me to spend all day writing, but alas. I did take English Lit at uni though which really developed my writing skills! Still waiting for publishers to start waving contracts at me though...

[MissOlivia22]

^^^^

XD

Update soon ?

[Taniya_K]

Loved the interaction between Aden and Roman. Like always, you give us such an insight into the character's minds and emotions. Love it.

Update soon please?

xoxo

[xknomex]

wow. That was amazing as usual!

I wish that had happened in the real show.

I love how you write the Aden and Roman scenes

update soon!

xx

[Taniya_K]

Aw sweet protective Geoff!

Loved how Annie and Jai met, but grr to Axel! Glad Geoff sorted that out.

Hope she gets to apologize to Aden.

xoxo

[xknomex]

wow I cant keep up with the updates you update so fast! Love it.

Cant wait till Annie apologizes to Aden.

xxx

[Aden+Belle forever]

I loved both of those last 2 chapters

Firstly, I am glad that Roman was there for Aden and was showing concern for him without pressuring him

Secondly, how Jai and Annie met, despite the interference from Axel.

Great work as always, please update soon

[MissOlivia22]

Loved it!

Update soon ?

[Taniya_K]

I loved it!

Love the Belle/Roman interaction. Haven't seen that around much.

Wonder what this was all a set up for? Is it for Aden to come work at the diner?!

Update soon.

xoxo