The Boy With The Thorn In His Side (by monkeysmoke) - comments

[Aden+Belle forever]

Dont doubt yourself, that was excellent, well written like the rest of the chapters so far

Poor Cassie, and poor Aden as well. He is trying but it is hard for him. Hopefully Roman will speak to him

Please update soon

[wrongturntaken]

That was amazing! I loved the end, i could completely get into Aden's head and his differing reactions to Cassie made so much sense!

I love your story so much!!!!

Please update soon! (as in NOW!) :D :D

[whispered_envy]

As everyone else has already said, I love how you write Aden's change of moods. They are very true to the character. Well done!

[Taniya_K]

LMAO! I'm sorry, I know that it was a serious scene at the beginning and all, but that ending just cracked me up! Loved the classic Aden and Belle! They're gonna be a laugh and a half!

Great update. I hope Irene won't freak!

Update soon?

xoxo

[xknomex]

Yay, I see some Adelleness starting appear

That last bit was soo funny. XD

Update soon.

xxx

[MissOlivia22]

loved it

Update soon ?

[wrongturntaken]

Aden and Belle interaction was awesome!!!!!! I really ABSOLUTELY CANNOT WAIT for the next chapter!!!!

Update soon???

[Taniya_K]

Dammit Aden! You were doing so good and then you had to go and say that!

Great chapter though. Loved the Adelle flirting at the beginning and I loved your explanation and getting into Aden's mind at the end.

Update soon!

xoxo

[Aden+Belle forever]

Another 2 awesome chapters

Loved Aden and Belle in both chapters, the interaction between them was perfect

But like Taniya said, dammit it Aden, who did you have to lose it like that at the end with Annie

Please update soon, cant wait to find out what happens next

[Jody]

I don't think I have reviewed this story before but thought I should let you know that I think it is amazing.

I loved the Annie/Aden scene. I love how he went from angry to understanding to angry again. His rant to Annie at the end was spot on.

Adelle parts are good as well. Real funny when Belle hit the ball over the table.

Edited October 4, 2008 by enjoy the ride