LAURZY! Posted November 23, 2008 Report Posted November 23, 2008 I really thought Belle was dead!! Loved it, even though then end was pretty sad! Cant wait for more Quote
Louise_2983 Posted November 23, 2008 Report Posted November 23, 2008 (edited) I did apologise first for making everyone think Belle was dead lol! Surely you'd rather I just played with your minds a bit than actually killed her? Plus I was trying to make the reader feel the same devastation and then relief that Aden did! Edited November 23, 2008 by Louise_2983 Quote
bikinikill Posted November 23, 2008 Report Posted November 23, 2008 well he surely isnt going to feel relief when he knows she doesnt want to see him. glory you are keeping us in suspense. i say this because i thought thank goodness shes updated, but alas, i shall wait in my corner and hope that belle comes to her senses soon. top work. Quote
Louise_2983 Posted November 23, 2008 Report Posted November 23, 2008 Sneak peek: Quote “It’s ok, I’m leaving” He looked to Belle for confirmation. “Walking away time right?” She nodded silently as he placed a gentle kiss on her forehead and walked out of the room. Quote
leah1234 Posted November 23, 2008 Report Posted November 23, 2008 no if its aden don't leave but if its angelo good riddens!!!!! update soon xxxx Quote
rokkafella125 Posted November 23, 2008 Report Posted November 23, 2008 do you know wat time the update will be up? i cant wait! good sneak! update soon! x Quote
SAM27# Posted November 23, 2008 Report Posted November 23, 2008 Wow what a chapter!!!! That was really clever of you making us all think Belle was dead...you have me fooled there for a while!!!!!! Poor Aden, blaming himself and all.....and then getting attacked by Angelo Aden is going to be heartbroken when Irene tells him Belle doesn't want to see him!! The Aden and Nicole interaction was really nice, I like how you described their brother and sister realtionship!! Louise_2983 said: Jack who couldn’t look any less professional if he tried, having positioned himself in front of the majestic Christmas tree Nicole had decorated with baby pink tinsel and silver bows. Almost as tall as the tree itself, Jack looked as though he was wearing the silver winged fairy as a hat. That made me laugh as it is so something that Jack would do on the show!!!!!! Can't wait for more!! Quote
xknomex Posted November 23, 2008 Report Posted November 23, 2008 :( Poor Belle. It must be a horrible thing to go through I hope she lets Aden in. He needs her and I think she really needs her. I knew he would be in her bedroom. I kinda had an inkling that that would be where he was. Update soon xxx Quote
LAURZY! Posted November 23, 2008 Report Posted November 23, 2008 Awww poor Belle Hope she talks everything through with someone soon! Really emotional update! loved it Looking forward to reading more Quote
leah1234 Posted November 23, 2008 Report Posted November 23, 2008 aaw well at least we now know why she didn't want to see him i hope she realises that she want s to be with hoim soon update soon xxx Quote
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