leah1234 Posted November 30, 2008 Report Posted November 30, 2008 aaw the belle/nicole banter was perfect i love this fic!!! update soon xxxx Quote
Taniya_K Posted November 30, 2008 Report Posted November 30, 2008 Huh, I swear I left a comment... Anyway, I loved that chapter. The interactions between the different charaters was brilliant. The Nicole/Belle stuff is so good. I love how you get their POV of everythng across, especially seeing as they're bounded by their exes. Melody What's she doing?! I hope Nic does listen to Geoff, but I honestly can believe why everyone thinks he's in the wrong, although to think that he would abandon his morals that quickly is a bit wrong. Can't wait for more. xoxo Quote
bikinikill Posted November 30, 2008 Report Posted November 30, 2008 That was really good. I'm really looking forward to reading the conversation between aden/belle and geoff/nicole. Quote
adelle Posted November 30, 2008 Report Posted November 30, 2008 Oh wow, I loved this chapter!! Loved all the conversations Can't wait for this ball or the conversations between Aden and Belle and Geoff and Nicole Update soon! Quote
wrongturntaken Posted December 1, 2008 Report Posted December 1, 2008 This fic makes so much more sense than the show! I loved Belle's reasonings for going away and how she had felt responsible for Aden, especially the bit about the kidnapping and her being more worried about him than herself! I think her going away was really good for Aden too, i think it will be good for both of them to see what they really want. I'm interested to see what Belle will do with Nicole's request and am also loving Nicole at the moment. I love her being protective of Aden and her reasons why, i like that she's trying to be friendly with Belle as well, it seems like she's grown whilst Belle's been away, although it's funny how you compare her to Colleen! I'm glad you wrote the scenes the way round you did with the flashback, i feel it made it much easier to read, excellent use of the device! I also loved Aden, his reactions were so good and Belle's feeling when she was talking to him, i just really never know what you're going to do next! Whatever happens in the fic; it's amazing! Excellent chapter! i really loved it and i can't wait for another update! Please more soon!!!!!!! Quote
matilda Posted December 1, 2008 Report Posted December 1, 2008 damn this computer...I had written a longish reply and got the IPS message Anyway what a brilliant chapter! I absolutely loved it. I was most intrigued to see how Aden would react when he saw Belle for the first time after six months. You actually proved me wrong majorly...I was anticipating that there would be anger or even tears but he showed empathy and care for Belle which goes to show how much he's grown. Maybe the time away from each other will prove to be the defining change in their relationship. One can only hope! Quote
meant2live Posted December 1, 2008 Report Posted December 1, 2008 6 motnhs I cannot believe she went for 6 months! But I'm glad she's worked everything through. Loved protective Nicole, that was sweet. And then Aden teasing Nic about saying he's 'freaking amazing', that was just so Aden lol. Glad that Aden and Belle have talked, but Nicoles right they need to still talk, Belle needs to tell him that she wants to pounce him! And Glad that nic and geoff are going to talk lol, very sneeky of Belle to do it that way though lol. Cannot wait for more. Quote
amz89 Posted December 1, 2008 Report Posted December 1, 2008 loved that, was that a real convo between adelle. coz of the Italic letters?? more soon please.. love this.. Quote
KaiyaBlake Posted December 1, 2008 Report Posted December 1, 2008 (edited) Oh My God. Ive spent so long trying to read this story, once i started i couldn't stop though! In Nicole's words it's Freaking Amazing haha. Everythings playing up atm so all quotes are in italics haha. And I need you to know that no matter what happened, whether I shouted at you or pulled away or beat myself up about it afterwards, not once have I ever kissed you and not meant it” That line even makes me melt - and I wrote it ahahaha, You're funny. *Smiles* Seriously how do you write such good things!? I'm like stunned. I had to pick out my favorite bits too. I hope this enlightens your day hahaha. “What?!” Belle tried to feign shock “Annie and I swapped rooms yesterday...the little...” “Belle” Angelo was clearly not amused. “Ok..ok. So I’m guessing you wouldn’t buy that he’s dating Irene now either?” She asked hopefully. “Belle” He repeated in exactly the same tone as before. “And Geoff would be really pushing it huh?” “Belle!” Ha! Belle's Hilarious.. "What happened to you?" Annie asked Aden as she trailed into the kitchen behind Geoff clearly having recovered from that morning’s illness. Aden hesitated and glanced at Belle before replying. "Belle" He told Annie "She's vicious when she's angry!" "Aden!" Belle laughed "Annie that is not true!" "Don't let her fool you too Annie, stay away from her!" Aden laughed as he exited the house and Belle was left to stare after him, mouth slightly agape. Knowing Annie he probably scared the sh*t out of her *Sighs* Poor Kid... “Well Martha was in the chemist” he admitted. “Oh no, did she see you?” she sighed rubbing her temple dramatically. “It’s ok” he comforted her “I just told her I think I’ve knocked up Nicole. Serves the little princess right, let people gossip about her for a change” Hhahahahahaaha... LMAO “It is Angelo’s isn’t it?” Instantly he knew he’d said the wrong thing as he saw something snap within Belle. “Actually I’m not sure” She replied jumping up and yanking her hand from him. “I mean I guess it could be Angelo’s or it could have been that night with Mr Stewart ...or that week with Bartlett... oh and then there was Geoff” she fumed. Belle's so sarcastic. I love it “And when exactly have you been checking Roman out?” “When haven’t I?” she winked at him cheekily. “All this,” she gestured to the both of them. “It’s all a ruse, I’m just trying to get close to Roman” Hahahaha. Evil lol. I can just imagine her saying that... “Belle, it’s so cold I can’t even feel my hands” he assured her. “Yeah well make sure I don’t either!” Hahaha *Laughs* “Nu –uh” he shook his head without opening his eyes. “Now who’s not playing by the rules?” he mumbled, still half asleep. A small, breathy moan escaped her exhausted body. “I’m cold” she whimpered as he lifted her palm with his own and pushed it back towards her on the other side of the bed. “Practice what you preach Belle. Practice what you preach” Hahahah. Practice what you preach. Cracks me up. “But it’s not really your place to be proud of me anymore is it?” Hate to say it Belle. But sucked in... Poor Aden, I want to hug him Hahah, now hopefully this HUGE comment makes up for ALL the times I haven't commented? Seriously Great Chapter and Story. Update soooooon Please? EDIT: Jesus Christ! Looks like I've posted a chapter. Woops, how embaressing? Edited December 1, 2008 by KaiyaBlake Quote
Louise_2983 Posted December 1, 2008 Report Posted December 1, 2008 (edited) KaiyaBlake said: EDIT: Jesus Christ! Looks like I've posted a chapter. Woops, how embaressing? Oh my gosh and you say I'm hilarious! I'm so touched that you took the time to read the whole thing and then picked out all your favourite bits! Thank you Wrongturntaken thank you for saying my fic makes more sense than the show, I do tend to spend a lot of time analysing things so I've put so so much thought into this. Thank you everyone for being so lovely and making my ego massive lol amz89 said: loved that, was that a real convo between adelle. coz of the Italic letters?? more soon please.. love this.. It was a flashback Edited December 1, 2008 by Louise_2983 Quote
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