Jody Posted October 17, 2008 Report Share Posted October 17, 2008 Good update. Just when I started to like Nicole a little in this chapter for finally doing something useful in this fic she goes and ruin it by making that comment about Belle being responsible if any thing happenned to Aden. Belle's speech was amazing. I wonder what Angelo would think of Belle giving Aden bedroom window priveleges. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted October 18, 2008 Report Share Posted October 18, 2008 I like this fic! It's a great idea. Can't wait to read more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frogg Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Ooooh great update. I love this story! I can't wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 OK that whole chapter was brilliant and emotional, but that last line just made me laugh [sorry. I just woke up if that's any help...] loved the bit on the beach. I'm glad that Aden didn't push her away again. I loved how you explained Belle's feeling, and even his through his words. It really made me get inside their heads. Lol at Irene. She knows there's something going on, doesn't she? More soon please! xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
monkeysmoke Posted October 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 ah that was epic! love the ending! good luck to Belle explaining that one away! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 LOVED IT I'm really glad Aden opened up to Belle on the beach Cant wait to see how Belle explains why Aden was climbing out of her room Great update Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Nice ending!!! Even if it is unfair! lol. I want to see Belle's reaction! That was a fantastic chapter! The Aden/Belle interaction was really sad! Especially when he got upset about not saying that he loved his dad! AOL! UPdate soon pleeeeeeeease!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 OK that whole chapter was brilliant and emotional, but that last line just made me laugh [sorry. I just woke up if that's any help...] xoxo No that's good it was meant to make you laugh as I wrote it with the line "He'll wake up, realise where he is, get dressed and climb out the window...preferably in that order" in mind as he obviously didn't do it in that order lol. Thanks for the comments everyone! I know that was a cruel place to leave it but I think you'll enjoy seeing/reading Belle squirm next chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 Wow! That bit on the beach was amazing! when he said that bit about his dad...*tear* haha at Angelo seeing Aden climb out Belles window! Please update soon!!! I wanna know how she reacts. xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louise_2983 Posted October 19, 2008 Report Share Posted October 19, 2008 I'm so glad everyone liked the beach scene I wasn't sure how realistic it would sound out of my head lol! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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