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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Racy fluff is catching on, hope i've started a trend now with giving it that name, lol!

That was my favourite chapter EVER!!!!!! You wrote that so perfectly, i could see everything happen, it was so passionate and endearing and amazing! I wish it were like that in the show, you're reunion was so much better!

I loved how Belle was really into it and that they had the cheeky banter at really perfectly timed intervals, but then it was really sudden how she said 'stop' and Aden did immediately.

This was seriously so fantastic, i never want this fic to end, it's brilliant!

That being said... please update soon! :D :D :D

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  wrongturntaken said:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Racy fluff is catching on, hope i've started a trend now with giving it that name, lol!

That was my favourite chapter EVER!!!!!! You wrote that so perfectly, i could see everything happen, it was so passionate and endearing and amazing! I wish it were like that in the show, you're reunion was so much better!

This was seriously so fantastic, i never want this fic to end, it's brilliant!

Aww thank you :D Thanks everyone for all the lovely comments. The fic may be coming to an end but don't panic I have a sequel planned! :)

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I loved this chapter.

The reunion was done so much better than on the show. This was so much better than I imagined it would be. And considering their interaction in this fic I already had really high hopes for it.

I am so happy that Belle is still dealing with losing the baby. I felt so sad for her when she said 'No baby'. Aden stopping imediately when she wanted him to was really sweet. I love that you had them talking in between all the racyfluff. It made it so much better.

But you're my skank.

- Hilarious

This chapter was brilliant.

Happy to see you're planning a sequel.

Please update soon.

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  Louise_2983 said:
When I look at this I dont see a disfigurement or an imperfection all I see is a permanent reminder of how much of a fighter you are. You're strong, determined and you never stop fighting for what you want and believe in. All this scar does is let the world know all those things, all those reasons why I love you

My favourite part. Their talk about the scar made this chapter for me.

Love that shes wearing her bracelet.

So Geoff was the one who came up with the idea to get them to dance. That surprised me. Glad he now realises that Aden is good for Belle.

Love all the Adelle fluff in this chapter and the last one. It's so different from where they started in this fic. They really have come along way. I hope the angst isn't completely gone though. You write angsty scenes really well and angsty Adelle scenes are always a pleasure to read.

Please update soon.

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I loved that it was Geoff's idea too!

Fantastic update once again! Absoloutely loved it! The way she kept trying to leave and he kept stopping her.. the talk about the scar... and the Nicole scenes just made it amazing once more!

Please update soon! can't wait for more! Really pleased to hear there's a sequel coming! :D

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