Stockholm Syndrome (by Louise_2983) - comments

[LAURZY!]

That last bit was just - wow!! made me well up

The star charm was such a good idea

Loved Nicole

Awww they're going on their first date

Great update

[Jody]

  Louise_2983 said:

What can we say? Hi baby, wish you were here? Like some tacky holiday postcard? she questioned him, almost annoyed.

Dammit Belle, a little sensitivity wouldn't kill you. I can understand her snapping but seriously shes not the only one hurting. She didn't have to say that out loud. This is hard for him too.

I really enjoyed the Aden/Belle scenes in this chapter. It's good to see them being happy. And then watching him be there for her in the end. It was all really good.

I loved Angelo in this chapter. I love that he didn't let Belles annoying comments get to him. He was really understanding and it was so nice to read. I hope we get to see more of him.

The idea Aden came up with to remember the baby was lovely.

Please update soon.

Edited December 21, 2008 by Jody

[Red Ranger 1]

Loved the opening scene and the sudden realisation that they were in the kitchen.Belle and Angelo's memorial was kinda sweet as well.

[Taniya_K]

That was such a sweet mix.

I loved the fluff at the beginning, and the bit at the end. The bit with Belle and Angelo was sad. Poor Angelo! He really feels/felt a bit left out. But I'm glad that he accepted it in the end.

More soon please.

xoxo

[xknomex]

Wow that last bit brought me to tears! it was soo sad

Naming a star after the baby was an amazing idea,

Cant wait till the next update

xx

[Louise_2983]

  Jody said:

  Louise_2983 said:

What can we say? Hi baby, wish you were here? Like some tacky holiday postcard? she questioned him, almost annoyed.

Dammit Belle, a little sensitivity wouldn't kill you. I can understand her snapping but seriously shes not the only one hurting. She didn't have to say that out loud. This is hard for him too.

I realise that wasn't her most sensitive moment but I was just trying to portray how uncomfortable she felt being there and in a way she was using sarcasm as her defence mechanism.

Thanks for the nice comments everyone

[Jody]

  Louise_2983 said:

  Jody said:

  Louise_2983 said:

What can we say? Hi baby, wish you were here? Like some tacky holiday postcard? she questioned him, almost annoyed.

Dammit Belle, a little sensitivity wouldn't kill you. I can understand her snapping but seriously shes not the only one hurting. She didn't have to say that out loud. This is hard for him too.

I realise that wasn't her most sensitive moment but I was just trying to portray how uncomfortable she felt being there and in a way she was using sarcasm as her defence mechanism.

Thanks for the nice comments everyone

No, I get it. I do wish she hadn't said it out loud for Angelos sake but I do get why she reacted that way as well. I just really felt bad for Angelo. But a little ranting towards Belle made it all better.

Edited December 21, 2008 by Jody

[rfran]

This brought a tear to my eye, really sad.

The miss placed sarcasm was really realistic, the sort of thing I would do when I can't cope with what I'm feeling and don't know how to talk about whats the matter. I'm glad she was honest about her regrets after admitting problems is really cathartic.

[wrongturntaken]

Wow! That was an amazing chapter! I loved how Angelo still seemed resentful towards Aden but then Belle's explanation really made everything make perfect sense! I loved the naming the star and I'm really glad you made it Aden's idea, it added a different edge to it. The charm was also perfect!

I also loved the fluff at the start and the scene at the end with Aden comforting Belle, that was so sweet!

I can't wait for the next update! PLEASE do NOT make me!!!!!!

[Adelle_fan1000]

That was great

I wanna read more