Chances (by jenlee) - comments

[Jody]

Really good update.

From Aden's lack of modesty, to not being able to stop himself from staring down the front of her dress, to lifting their hands so that they were palm to palm Aden is just a mixture of everything in this fic. Flirty, sweet, heartbroken, hilarious, jealous, and little full of himself (even if that one is just him teasing).

I laughed so much at Aden's jealousy, wanting to hit Zac with the chair.

Poor Aden losing the number. I just saw that happening when I read Zac came up to him by the pool.

[jenlee]

Just a quick thanks for all of your reviews, next chapter should be up tomorrow night

[Georgia]

omg ! this is soooo awesome ! u have to keep updating ! i love adelle fics and now

I LOVE YOU

[whispered_envy]

I thought I commented this! I really like how they keep finding one another, but then losing each other again- you write it very well!

[xknomex]

update soon?

[jenlee]

Soon I promise, hopefully tomorrow night, NZ time. I've had a bit of writers block as to how to go about the next chapter. I know what I want to do, I'm just having trouble getting it written. In the mean time I did post a short one shot so for anyone who didn't read it...Twenty Seven Bobby Pins

Edited September 13, 2008 by jenlee

[mk1diva]

aw so sad belle dont go to london please make aden and me happy again lol

u have to update this is brilliant!!!

[wooo_im_cool]

OMFG!! this is incredible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aww it was so cute, but sad at the same time

this is maybe the best fic

the way you write is unbelievable!

poor aden, she has to change her mind

please update soon:)

[jenlee]

Aww, you guys are sweet *blushes*

[xknomex]

OMG :(

Belle change your mind!!!! stay with Aden,

Adelle belong together forver!!!

update soon