Louise_2983 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 Ooh can't wait to see what trouble Nicole's going to stir up! You might want to reread and edit as it slips into first person when Belle's waking Aden up
xknomex Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 That was NOT crappy!!!!!! ooo Nicole has arrived lol that she thought Belle was Roman's girlfriend Thanks for updating :D xxx
MissOlivia22 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 Whoop thanks Louise XD I've been writing Twilight fanfiction in different peoples point of view and have gotten used to using 'I'. My mistake XD
HAA Girl 08 Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 Can't wait for more! Definetly NOT crappy! How could you say such a thing..?! Again, cannot wait for more!
wrongturntaken Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 Definitely not crappy! I love how you brought Nicole into it, it was very funny!!! Aden was so sweet, linking hands with Belle! Can't wait for another update!!! Soon please!!
LAURZY! Posted January 25, 2009 Report Posted January 25, 2009 That was so good!!! not crappy at all Awww, Aden linked their hands Brill update
Zetti Posted January 26, 2009 Report Posted January 26, 2009 Nicole made me laugh out loud It wasnt crappy at all!
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