SAM27# Posted November 3, 2008 Report Posted November 3, 2008 Great start.....intrigued with where it will go from here and how Aden and Belle's relationship with develop.... Can't wait for more!!
Zetti Posted November 3, 2008 Report Posted November 3, 2008 I like the concept. Aden was abused then? Is it going to play out like it did in H&A? Good start to the fic
Beate Posted November 3, 2008 Report Posted November 3, 2008 This looks like it will be areally great fic. I love how you started almost from the beginning.
MissOlivia22 Posted November 3, 2008 Report Posted November 3, 2008 Thank You Another chapter might be up later, need to revise.... Chapter two Belle saw his face fall as she told him that she had to go. She found is extremely flattering that he liked talking to her enough to be disappointed when she had to leave. For the last hour, the two of them had sat talking. Neither had wanted to delve into themselves, so instead they had talked about things in the magazine she was reading and drinking the milkshakes which Aden had paid for. The one thing she had noted was that when the orange haired lady had shouted to the chef that she needed help taking orders, Aden tensed. They had yet to order meaning the chef, who name she did not know, was the one to come and see what they wanted. As he approached she saw Aden look down and avoid his eye contact whilst they ordered. She could sense the tension in the air and was curious what it was all about. She had asked what it was all about but he had just changed the subject and instead changed the topic. It was the she decided she had better go, it was getting dark. “See ya in school tomorrow!” She said cheerfully to him as she stood up, which he copied and watched as she left leaving him standing in the basically deserted diner with no clue where to go now or what to do. The previous night he had slept at the beach, not good with having school the next day. He had arrived late after sleeping in, he looked dishevelled and was aching all over. He had managed to hide his discomfort and no one noticed his attire, but after another night on the beach, he was sure someone would notice how terrible he looked. He was suddenly pulled out of his thoughts by Roman, who was standing behind him. He turned around sharply, only to find that Roman was only a steps away, meaning he nearly banged into him. He stepped back to make the distance greater and waited to see what he was going to say. “Hey mate” He said, concerned “Hi” He said bluntly. They stood in silence whilst Roman assessed his state. “So...” He said “ How are things” There was an extra emphasis on things so Aden understood he was talking about the incident with his father. “Fine... Look I’ve gotta go. Stuff to do, people to see...” He turned to leave but Roman pulled him back by the arm, only to have Aden pull his arm out the of the grasp and turn back to him, agitation filled his face. “Look what do you want?” He asked “I’m just worried about you” Roman said genuinely “Why! It’s none of your business” “It became my business when I saw your dad trying to throttle you to death!” Roman said, a little louder than he had planned. “Shut up!” Aden said nearly shouting. Roman ,realizing he had made a mistake and that people were beginning to look at them, apologised to Aden and hushing his voice. “Where do you stay last night” He whispered cautiously to him. “On the beach...” Aden said ashamed he was sleeping rough. Roman sighed, his concerns increasing. “I’ve got a spare room at my house.. You can stay at mine till you sort things out” “I don’t need your sympathy!” “It’s not sympathy, I’m just worried!” “I don’t need your pity. Just stay away from me!” Aden hissed turning on his heels and heading out the door. For a moment, Roman thought he might have convinced him, but obviously not.
Aden+Belle forever Posted November 3, 2008 Report Posted November 3, 2008 I like this story, its different to all the other fics Loved those first 2 chapters, glad that Belle hasnt lost any of her independence, but I do wish Aden would let Roman help him Please update soon
meant2live Posted November 3, 2008 Report Posted November 3, 2008 Loved it... that was awesome. And Aden... Roman's just worried, don't be so stubborn, but loving the friendships and stuff developing... looking very interesting. More please soon.
LAURZY! Posted November 3, 2008 Report Posted November 3, 2008 That was a really good update! Aden needs to be less stubborn and let Roman help him! Really enjoying reading it
MissOlivia22 Posted November 3, 2008 Report Posted November 3, 2008 Small update before bed Warnings: Scene of abuse Chapter three Belle stood over Aden as he lay slumped on the floor. He was still in uniform, his school bag on the floor next to him. There was sand on his face from where he had been laying and he was huddled in a ball, most likely to keep warm. She watched him for a moment wondering what he was doing there. He hung out with the people who had called her a hobo on the first day and she doubted they would hang out with him if he was also sleeping rough. They properly didn’t know, or he wasn’t sleeping rough. She contemplated that he could have possible been drunk and just passed out on the beach, but thinking back to school and the Diner, he did seem dishevelled back then as if he had slept outside. She bent down next to him and couldn’t smell any alcohol. She smiled at his light snoring, before standing back up. She looked down at him once more before leaving him laying there, heading towards her planned sleeping area which she had found earlier that day . >>> He tensed as he felt the rough hand of his grandfather touch his upper leg under the table. Aden had finished his meal but he was made to stay sitting until his grandfather and finished himself. The room was dark, his father past out from the alcohol in his bed. He fidgeted under the grip and a tear fell down his face. His grandfather’s grip loosened as he continued with his meal, meaning Aden was able to slip out from the table and run into his bedroom There were no calls after him, just the scraping of the chair legs as his grandfather stood. He heard the door click open and heard the sound of his belt scratching the wooden frame as he slid through. He was laying on his front, trying his very hardest to keep the quilt as tightly wrapped around him as he could, trying to delay the inevitable. He heard him approach and softly pull at the quilt as if he was teasing him making him start to shake. His grandfathers tight grip eventually pulled the quilt away from him, leaving him laying there, helpless and unable to stop what was coming. Tears were now spilling freely down his face as he heard the man he was suppose to be able to trust, unzip his pants and sit next to him on the bed. Gently stroking his body. Aden sat up forcefully, taking a deep breath as he began to make sense of his surroundings. He tried to steady his breathing as he felt a tear fall down his face. His ears pricked as he heard voices in the distance. He stood up as fast as he could grabbing his bag and turning his back to the voices. He stood there rigid as the voices past and slowly disappeared. He turned around making sure no one was in site. His heart was still racing as decided he couldn’t stay there any longer. He walked down the beach slowly as more and more tears freely ran down his face as though he was the small boy fearing what he knew was going to happen. As he turned the corner around the corner to small area which was secluded to the rest of the beach, he was shocked t find Belle asleep on the floor. She awoke at the sound and looked up at the crying boy in front of her.
meant2live Posted November 3, 2008 Report Posted November 3, 2008 Loved it, it was awesome. Hope he lets her in. And the really connect more soon when you can
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