H&A_diehard Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Oh I hope you update again today. That was really good.
MissOlivia22 Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 I'm really busy ATM, so heres a small chapter on Belle chapter five “Oi!” She heard someone shout after her. Sighing she turned around to see three teenagers standing at the top of the beach. She laughed as one of them slipped on their way down and realizing they were drunk. One of them helped the boy up from the floor clumsily only to slip partially himself “Oh, this will be fun” She muttered to herself sarcastically as they approached “Ello’ sweetheart” The one on the far left slurred “Dont. Call me sweetheart” She said bluntly emphasis on the "don't". “Aww, don’t be like that” He said stepping forward and attempting to grab her hand, only to have his shoulder whacked and her to step away. “Be careful Axel, you never know where she’s been” the boy in the middle sneered and they trio laughed simultaneously. “Oh ha ha ha” She said “ Your so funny...” “Cough.Hobo.Cough” the boy said, the best he comeback he could come up with He was suddenly reeled back after a hand reached out and slapped him hard on the face leaving a red mark to begin to form on his cheek. “You little..” He started “Angel. Sweetheart. Darling” Belle interrupted her words almost dripping with sarcasm “Oi, don’t talk to him like that” The third member of this drunken group said, speaking up for the first time. “Or what, you’ll puke over me” She said, but without waiting for a reply, she simply turned on her heels and headed away from them. “Get back here, don’t walk away from me” Axel slurred. To which Belle simply replied by holding her middle finger up to them as she walked away, ignoring any calls after her.
LAURZY! Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Go Belle!! Loved seeing Belle's tough/humorous side, it was great
Taniya_K Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Lmao! Love the classic Belle! Good to see her back again! Great chapter once again! I hope you give us more soon! xoxo
H&A_diehard Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 I'm really busy ATM, so heres a small chapter on Belle chapter five “Oi!” She heard someone shout after her. Sighing she turned around to see three teenagers standing at the top of the beach. She laughed as one of them slipped on their way down and realizing they were drunk. One of them helped the boy up from the floor clumsily only to slip partially himself “Oh, this will be fun” She muttered to herself sarcastically as they approached “Ello’ sweetheart” The one on the far left slurred “Dont. Call me sweetheart” She said bluntly emphasis on the "don't". “Aww, don’t be like that” He said stepping forward and attempting to grab her hand, only to have his shoulder whacked and her to step away. “Be careful Axel, you never know where she’s been” the boy in the middle sneered and they trio laughed simultaneously. “Oh ha ha ha” She said “ Your so funny...” “Cough.Hobo.Cough” the boy said, the best he comeback he could come up with He was suddenly reeled back after a hand reached out and slapped him hard on the face leaving a red mark to begin to form on his cheek. “You little..” He started “Angel. Sweetheart. Darling” Belle interrupted her words almost dripping with sarcasm “Oi, don’t talk to him like that” The third member of this drunken group said, speaking up for the first time. “Or what, you’ll puke over me” She said, but without waiting for a reply, she simply turned on her heels and headed away from them. “Get back here, don’t walk away from me” Axel slurred. To which Belle simply replied by holding her middle finger up to them as she walked away, ignoring any calls after her. Ha! Ha ha ha! Good on you Belle. That is exactly identical to what I'd have done, including the last bit. Thanks for the extra update, you are very kind.
Aden+Belle forever Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Yeah, go Belle Good on her for telling off Axel and his little cronies
xknomex Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 GO BELLE!!!! Handled brilliantly!!!! Thanks for the update xxx
meant2live Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Go Belle... you're writing her how she was when she first turned up in the bay, which is awesome cos she was such a little firecracker... so rebelious, stubborn and tough... love it cant wait for more this bit was wicked
wrongturntaken Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 I loved Belle's feistiness in that chapter! The one before this was so sweet, i actually went awwwww out loud really quietly, lol. I love how Aden had tears sliding down his face even though he was trying to be defensive, i thought Belle's reactions to him were perfect. Once again, i love the way you write! Please update soon!!!!!!!
adelle fan. Posted November 5, 2008 Report Posted November 5, 2008 Great updates can't wait to read more.
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