matticus01 Posted November 5, 2008 Report Posted November 5, 2008 haha, Belle was so funny I love the way your writing this update soon
SAM27# Posted November 5, 2008 Report Posted November 5, 2008 The last two chapters were awesome.... Poor Aden hopefully he lets someone in soon, someone like Belle (hint hint) I love tough Belle, she showed those drunk boys!!!! Can't wait for more!!
adelle Posted November 5, 2008 Report Posted November 5, 2008 Loved the last few chapters!! Go Belle, she sure knows how to handle herself! Aden needs to let Belle in, or Roman Update soon!!
BeforeItsTooLate Posted November 5, 2008 Report Posted November 5, 2008 Just read all of your fic and gotta say that I really like it; it's a really unique idea... Loved Belle in the last chapter, she was hilarious Can't wait for the next update!
MissOlivia22 Posted November 5, 2008 Report Posted November 5, 2008 Thanks:) Because the Belle in this fic is new I thought i would give her the attitude she had when she was new in the show chapter six “Morning sleepy head” Belle said as Aden opened his eyes slightly, trying to get used to the sunlight. “Come on, no more sleep, school starts in 15 minutes” Belle stated when she saw Aden close his eyes again tired and uncomfortable from sleeping in an odd position. Sitting up, he found that there was a woolly grey blanket draped over him and he shot her an confused look. “You looked cold” She said simply “Close your eyes” Aden again looked confused but did what she asked and waited until she told him he could open his eyes. Looking up her saw her changed into her school uniform and her clothes from before were dropped untidily. “I thought you left” Aden said agitated she had came back when he was asleep. He didn’t like knowing someone had watched him sleep, it made him feel vulnerable. When he was asleep, he couldn’t hide anything. “Yeh well after walking down the beach for an hour, have an encounter with your drunken mates, climbing on the jump rock, sitting on jump rock, slipping on the way down from jump rock and then realizing I left my bag up there and had to go get it ba.” Belle listed without breath before getting interrupted by Aden “Ok, ok. I get the point!” “Yeh well after all that and then failing to find somewhere else secluded to sleep I decided to come back here” She said sitting down next to him “I thought you would have been gone by the time I got back” “Musta fallen asleep” Aden muttered and they sat in silence for a moment. “So what was going on with you last night?” Belle asked in a hushed tone, even though no one else was around “Nothing” Aden said bluntly, standing up, shaking of her hand which she had placed on his arm “Shouldn’t we get to school?” “Yeh Ok” Belle said realizing he didn’t want to go into detail. She took his hand which he offered to help pull her up before the both headed down the beach towards the school. Belle linked arms with him in a friendly manner and he smiled down at her, which she didn’t notice “You don’t have to walk with me” Belle said sullen. “What do you mean?” Aden asked confused with he offer to distance herself from him “Well, your friends with the people who are obviously going to give me grief and I understand if you don’t want to be seen with me” Belle explained, but as she went to pull her arm from his, he held it there “My friends are jerks. Come one” He said pulling her towards the school entrance. “But why?” Belle asked pulling him back “You really confusing you know!” Aden exclaimed “What do you mean, “why”” “Well, most people wouldn’t give a toss about me. But here you are, being nice to me, talking to me, being my friend” “Most people here are fake. There superficial and pretend to be something they aren’t in order to make everyone love them. Your genuine. You don’t care what people think. And anyway, your really nice” Belle pondered on this for a moment before letting out giggle “Big words for you. Can you spell them?” She asked sarcastically “Oi” Aden said whacking her jokingly on the arm “Ok, ok. Thanks” She said shyly, looking up to him who smiled back “You’re welcome”
Taniya_K Posted November 5, 2008 Report Posted November 5, 2008 Aw! Cute! I do love this Belle! She's so cool. Cannot wait for more. I wanna see what it's like at school for them. xoxo
Aden+Belle forever Posted November 5, 2008 Report Posted November 5, 2008 Aw, Adelle Loved the interaction between the 2 of them, especially when Aden told Belle that she was nice, too cute
HeavenForbid Posted November 5, 2008 Report Posted November 5, 2008 Awesome updates! A few to catch up on which was happy by him because I really liked this fic. Chapter 4: Poor Aden! I hope he will be able to open up to Belle. It was a great scene. Well written. Chapter 5: I loved how Belle could show how tough she really is. And how she won’t talk crap from anyone. Chapter 6: I’m loving how you have made Belle more like she was when she first joined. That was a really cute chapter for them. I liked how Aden realises his friends are jerks. Please update soon! Loving it!
LAURZY! Posted November 5, 2008 Report Posted November 5, 2008 Awwww so sweet Love the interaction between them, hope they help each other out Great update
wrongturntaken Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 i really like Belle in this, and their interaction in this chapter was brilliant!!! Please update soon!!!!!!
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