MissOlivia22 Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 Thanks guys. I've finished my H/W so here's another update chapter 8 “He wait up” Belle shouted after Aden as he walked down the corridor, just heading out the door. “Hey” He said, turning out reluctantly. He was hoping to go back to his house and have a shower and get some clothes, before she caught up with him “Where you off to then?” She asked hoping they could hang out for a bit seeing as he was the only person who would. “I... Uh. Have some stuff to do” He said vaguely and saw Belle rolled her eyes at him “Such as?” “Nothing interesting. I’ll meet up with you later if you want to” He said annoyed she was being so persistent. “I’ve got nothing else to do, I’ll come with you” She said chirpily. She stepped in front of him, stopping him from walking any further. She looked up to him and pouted, causing him to let out a laugh. She may be persistent but she was really cute and most likely the most persuasive person he had ever met “Fine!” He said dramatically linking arms with her as they had earlier that day and let her pull him down the hallway as he was going to slow for her. “ I don’t know why you’re going In front. You don’t know where we are going” He said cheekily at her, pulling her back to his speed and smiling at her. -- As they approached his house, he slowed down considerably and eventually came to a stop halfway down the driveway. “And this would be....?” She asked examining the house. They drive was empty, the windows shut and the curtains drawn. It didn’t look like it had anyone living there “My house” He said sullenly and stepping up to the door. “So what... You just decided that the beach was more comfortable than your bed” “No, I just had to get away” “And you’ve decided to come back home... or what...?” “No I’m here to get some clothes and stuff” He said pushing the key into the door. He pushed the door open a little before turning and facing back to Belle “Maybe you should stay out here, I won’t be long” Aden said, reluctant to allow her into the house “I’ve lived without a house for ages, I don’t care if there are some alcohol bottles around” Belle said leaving Aden confused of how she new why he didn’t want to let her in Belle pointed through the small gap Aden had left opened which allowed her to see a small pile of beer bottles of beer on the floor. “Come on. I’m guessing your dads not here don’t want to risk him coming back” Belle said pushing he gently so she could enter the room. Aden followed her inside and closed the door and surveyed the scene. There was a large amount of beer bottles on the floor, the bin overflowing with them. He could see some that were there before he left, so the room had obviously hadn’t been cleaned since then. Aden stepped forward around Belle and headed to his bedroom and began to put some stuff in a bag, including, some clean shirts for school and some clothes for during the day. Belle observed from the doorframe, not saying a word as he calmly collected his things. He gently pushed pass her and put the bag down on the sofa “That it?” She asked “Uh no, I’m just gunna have a quick shower” Aden said “I won’t be long” Belle watched as he headed towards the bathroom and shut the door, leaving her alone with the rest of the house. She went back to his bedroom, deciding to have a little bit of a snoop around. She entered, leaving the door open and looked around, smiling at the bright pink lava lamp situated on the desk. It was kind of bland, nothing special and relativity small. Stepping out, she went to examine the photos which were on the shelf in the main room. There were three photos, all in frames. The middle picture was a family picture; A young looking Woman sitting with a baby on her lap, with long blonde hair, along with two more children, one around 5, the other around 8. They all looking happy, the baby looked as though it was giggling and the other boys grinning cheekily. Moving on the next picture, she found another family photo only this time, the Woman was not in the image, this time an older man and again the three children. Looking more carefully, she wasn’t sure which one of the children was Aden, but looking at the youngest one, she found that whilst the other seemed happy, he did not. He was looking up at the camera, and looked extremely cute, but he wasn’t smiling, and something about him, deep inside, looked broken. Gasping at a sudden knock at the door, she flung around, and with it flung the image onto the floor breaking the glass.
Taniya_K Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 That end description of the photo was just so... wow. I wonder if that's Larry or Aden. I'd prefer it if it was Larry I think! More soon please! xoxo
wrongturntaken Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 chapter 7 was soooooooo cute! I loved the note!!!!!! I liked that he took her back to the house with him! This is such an interesting idea and i love Belle's character!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!
LAURZY! Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 Awww i really really love Belle in this!!! Really really great update
Beate Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 Good updates. Loved the dialouge between Aden & Belle. Cute with the note.
xknomex Posted November 6, 2008 Report Posted November 6, 2008 aw They have such a good relationship in this fic! Love it The description's of the photo's were really amazing, I hope she didn't break the photo with his mum in. I wonder who is there!?!? Update soon xxx
meant2live Posted November 7, 2008 Report Posted November 7, 2008 oooh love it, very very cute. Cannot wait to see who it is at the door, more than likely Larry, which will make it an interesting chapter cant wait tos ee what u come up with tho
adelle fan. Posted November 7, 2008 Report Posted November 7, 2008 That was good can't wait to read more.
BeforeItsTooLate Posted November 7, 2008 Report Posted November 7, 2008 I really love how they interact, it's quite sweet Loved the updates, can't wait for the next...
Aden+Belle forever Posted November 7, 2008 Report Posted November 7, 2008 Chapter 7 - Aw, so cute. Loved how Belle lied so Aden didnt get in trouble, too cute Chapter 8 - Loved how you described the picture of Aden's familar, but who caught Belle in his room
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