Lise Posted November 11, 2008 Report Posted November 11, 2008 That was great. Belle is funny when she's drunk. Can't wait to read the chapter.
Luc Posted November 12, 2008 Report Posted November 12, 2008 This is really good Luc But can you space it out more so old people like me can read it better? Like what I have just done for chapter three ?. Thanks for the comments guys! Next chapter should be up soon .
Zetti Posted November 12, 2008 Report Posted November 12, 2008 Yayy drunk Belle Wonder if Aden will tell her hmm
Miranda Posted November 12, 2008 Report Posted November 12, 2008 Sorry Luc, yes just like that. That's what I get for posting quickly without looking But I love that each part is written from a different person's point of view, I think your writing has really improved since I first read one of your stories
Luc Posted November 22, 2008 Report Posted November 22, 2008 Aww... Thankyou so much Miranda . Thanks for the comments guys! I don't know when next chapter will be up, because my exams start on Monday, so I have to study, so here's a preview of the next chapter . It is still from Belle's POV. “Because you have to!” I shot at him, sounding concerned, “You don’t want to lose your job!” He rolled over and faced me, “My job,” He began, running his hand through his dark blond hair, “Doesn’t matter anymore,” “Why not?” I asked him, waiting for a logical answer, “It just doesn’t!” He snapped again before turning away from me, “But why?” I demanded. I looked at Aden, a concerned look was spreading across my face. I had never heard him talk like this. “It just doesn’t,” He yelled, “Will you stop nagging!” He wined. I stared at the back of his head, slightly taken a back by the tone of his voice.
Adelle2008 Posted November 28, 2008 Report Posted November 28, 2008 “Watch where you’re going you silly old bitch!” I called out. Geoff shook his head and reached out for my hand again. I clasped it tightly in my hand and stood up. I wrapped my arms around his neck tightly. I picked up another bottle of wine from a nearby table, “I think you’ve had enough,” He shot at me, prising the bottle out of my fingers; I let it slip out of them reluctantly. “I think it’s time you went to bed,” He informed me, I rolled my eyes. “I’m still... I’m still fine, I could go for hours,” I slurred, before loosening my grip on his neck. I slipped and landed on my back, again. “Okay, okay,” Don't you just love it when characters get drunk and do stupid things...so funnny. Good chapter
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