The Day The World Ended (by rfran) - comments

[Lise]

That was great.

Nicole's just being a good friend to Aden. Hopefully Geoff will understand that in time.

[rfran]

Thanks for the comments I love to hear what you all think, gets me motivated to continue writting, which is somthing I never thought I'd do (I'm dyslexic and not very confident).

I need to edit the next chapter to make sure it isn't gettin to heavy, cause it could.

I'll try and get it posted tomorrow

[xknomex]

any chance of an update tonight?

xxx

[Taniya_K]

*tears* That was so powerful. I've got tears in my eyes.

The beginning was beautiful, and then it got sad. Poor Aden.

Ben. I can imagine that.

More soon please!

xoxo

[LAURZY!]

Awww, that last line was so sad

This fic is great, its so sad, but quite intriguing at the same time

Really cant wait to see whats gonna happen

[xknomex]

that last line just brought me to tears!!!!

Ben *tear*

poor poor adelle!

update soon

xx

[meant2live]

loved the fluff... but adens pain

more please love it soooo much

[Beate]

Loved the Adelle moments.

I feel for Aden. Hope he comes back to the bay soon.

[Taniya_K]

That was so beautifully written. I have tears in my eyes, and that's saying a lot. I'm glad that you did it from Belle's POV first. But gosh, that's so sad. I can't believe what happened. I know this is just a fic, but it's still so sad! And the contrast between her life then and now was really good!

I hope we get to see that day from Aden's POV? And maybe who the driver was [or isn't that important?]? I wanna know so much more now! Like, why did Aden leave exactly?

Wow... I dunno what else to say. I really can't put into words how much I loved it.

Cannot wait for more.

xoxo

[xknomex]

wow, just...wow.

That was written so beauitfully.

I'm lost for words, that was so amazing and heartbreaking. That is sooo sad!!!

wow.

update soon

xxx