The Day The World Ended (by rfran) - comments

[Lise]

Wow, just wow! That was so sad, yet beautiful.

The flashback was good.

They both need to talk to each other, soon!

Can't wait for more.

[Red Ranger 1]

I liked that one, the way you showed how they were both feeling.Looking forward to a proper discussion between them.

[susanf6230]

Looking forward to next update, your writing is fantastic

[rfran]

Been really busy the last couple of weeks so got not had time to sit and focus on the next bit which I'm finding difficult to get right anyway have some time between Christmas and new year when every one else has to go to work, so I'll try and get to grips with this then.

Edited December 21, 2008 by rfran

[LAURZY!]

That was a great update! honestly your writing just gets better and better!

I hope they do talk, really looking forward to seeing how its gonna end, really sad its almost over though

Loved it

[Taniya_K]

I agree- that was a really great update!

I am relly disappointed that this is coming to an end, but I cannot see how it all ends up.

Cannot wait for the last chapter.

xoxo

[jdoddy]

Read this story with difficulty I must say, I have never come as close to crying while reading a fic as I just have in the last 20 minuites...

loving the story, and your writing style is amazing and not a word is wasted.

I am waiting for the notification email with your name on it rfan.

Well Done

[LAURZY!]

WOW! WOW! WOW!

SO, so good, loved it. Their talk was brilliant and the ending was so fitting, i think it was the right way to go about it in the end! however in my head a few years down the line they eventually get together

It has been an absolute pleasure reading this

Loved it all!!

[xknomex]

OMG... WOW

That was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow, That was one amazing fic,!!

xx

[jdoddy]

Amazing Chapter, really well written.

Edit: - I obviously didn't read the last few lines -

Edited December 31, 2008 by jdoddy