Jody Posted October 4, 2008 Report Posted October 4, 2008 (edited) That certainly wasn't a bore. You should write long chapters like this more often. I guess my worry about Drew from last time wasn't all that nessecary so far. Loved him in this chapter. Belle and Mattie teasing was him hilarious. The whole part with the three them sitting there talking was great. Why can't we have scenes like that with the characters just hanging out together on the show. Can't wait to find out what's up with Aden's dad. And looking forward to finding out about the stamp as well. I guess the drama is officially here. Forgot to review the last chapter so I thought I should mention how much I loved Ruby's idea that Aden could be her birthday present. Edited October 4, 2008 by enjoy the ride Quote
SAM27# Posted October 4, 2008 Report Posted October 4, 2008 Now you have me even more intrigued!!!!!!!! The stamp on Aden's hand, something happening with his father....getting more and more interesting!!!!! It’s created him, didn’t it?” She nodded in Drew’s direction, referring to the time when Jazz had told him that." Hehehehe...That line was harsh but extremely funny!!! Don't apologise for the length of the chapter...I didn't want it to end!!!!! Quote
xknomex Posted October 4, 2008 Report Posted October 4, 2008 you cant leave it there :o Update ASAP Quote
Lise Posted October 4, 2008 Report Posted October 4, 2008 That was a really good chapter! The Belle/Matilda/Drew scene was great. What's up with Aden's dad? Can't wait to find out. Quote
HAA Girl 08 Posted October 4, 2008 Report Posted October 4, 2008 Can't wait for next chap! What's happened to Aden's dad... Please update soon! Quote
H&A_diehard Posted October 5, 2008 Report Posted October 5, 2008 Oh that is pure evil leaving it there. :o I will forgive you though since I did nearly die laughing at the Mattie/Drew/Belle conversation. Update soon. Pretty please. :) Quote
zzazzb Posted October 5, 2008 Report Posted October 5, 2008 gosh your a killer with cliffhangers but excelent chapter, never apologise for long updates i love them. and what was that you said at the end, you want us to hurt you for leaving it there?! if thats the case.. *joins MissOlivia22* update soon (and seriously, TELL US WHAT ADEN'S BEEN UP TO!...please?) Quote
Taniya_K Posted October 5, 2008 Report Posted October 5, 2008 and what was that you said at the end, you want us to hurt you for leaving it there?! if thats the case.. *joins MissOlivia22* update soon (and seriously, TELL US WHAT ADEN'S BEEN UP TO!...please?) Geez you gus are violent! *hides* And ok, I can reveal that you will find out about what Aden's been up to next chapter! Thanks for the comments guys! xoxo Quote
H&A_diehard Posted October 5, 2008 Report Posted October 5, 2008 and what was that you said at the end, you want us to hurt you for leaving it there?! if thats the case.. *joins MissOlivia22* update soon (and seriously, TELL US WHAT ADEN'S BEEN UP TO!...please?) Geez you gus are violent! *hides* And ok, I can reveal that you will find out about what Aden's been up to next chapter! Thanks for the comments guys! xoxo Thought you'd updated. Just kidding. Sure it will be worth the wait. Quote
H&A_diehard Posted October 5, 2008 Report Posted October 5, 2008 This has fallen off the front page. :o Quote
Recommended Posts
Join the conversation
You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.