Untroubled (by Taniya_K) - comments

[Taniya_K]

No problemo. I think I'm getting a bit sloppy with my fic and getting everything that I'm thinking down so if you have any questions, just ask.

xoxo

[xknomex]

^^ your not getting sloppy!!!!

[H&A_diehard]

One question.

The ink on Adens arm. Do we know about that yet or not? I am a bit confused.

I haven't said it in so many words, because I wanted you to make the connection. It was going to be addressed once again in the story, but if you want to know then it's:

A stamp from when he went to see his Dad in prison. It indicated he was guest at the prison, used instead of badges. I know some prisons in America have those for safety reasons, but I don't know about the UK/Australian jail system. Sorry. I guess I should have thought about that before and made sure.

I can't believe I never thought of that.

It's a bit like a dream I had, I was on a train and ended up in Israel (I think) and some nutter in a black uniform tried to drag me away to be excuted. Anyway, somehow I got the attention of one of the other guys, showed them what must have been a stamp or tattoo and they let me go. I then ended up queuing to get out of the place I was in and other folk were queuing up to get executed. I didn't warn them either. I woke up before feeling too bad though.

Oh and you're not getting sloppy btw.

[adelle]

Great chapter!!

The Roman/Nicole scene was classic

Adelle fluff very good, more please!

[bikinikill]

hey

so i just read the whole fic and its great. its lovely to be in adelle together land for one, and you are really good at this.

keep it up!

[Lise]

The last three chapters have been great!

I loved Roman's reaction with Nicole.

I hope Larry's going to be ok.

[zzazzb]

One question.

The ink on Adens arm. Do we know about that yet or not? I am a bit confused.

I haven't said it in so many words, because I wanted you to make the connection. It was going to be addressed once again in the story, but if you want to know then it's:

A stamp from when he went to see his Dad in prison. It indicated he was guest at the prison, used instead of badges. I know some prisons in America have those for safety reasons, but I don't know about the UK/Australian jail system. Sorry. I guess I should have thought about that before and made sure.

i had a feeling thats what it was.

“I’m just saying… It’s not like you didn’t do anything stupid when you were my age.” She told him. “I mean, hello?” Nicole waved a hand around her body to indicate what she was getting at.

LOVED that line so very Nicole.

and i definatly don't think your writings getting sloppy, and i'm loving the long chaps

update soon

(btw, did you realise your already up to page 32 )

[mk1diva]

great updates loved the arguement between nic and roman!

your writing is definatley not getting sloppy!

[adelle]

AWww, poor Aden having nightmares!! He would be horrified if he knew he was physically hurting Belle!

Great chapter, very emotional!! You wrote that so beautifully

Update soon

[Jody]

Great chapter.

I loved everything about the whole first part about Belle's thoughts on Aden's nightmares. It really showed how well she knows and loves him. Especially that part about her sticking the pain so he doesn't have to wake up.

With Aden snapping at Belle and refusing to even think about seeing his dad to Belle being really scared for him, Roman really is the voice of reason in this situation.