mk1diva Posted October 7, 2008 Author Report Posted October 7, 2008 aw poor aden with the nightmares but how sweet was belle during it he would be devasted if he knew he'd hurt her AOL O dear whats belle thinking of doing now.... Quote
Lise Posted October 7, 2008 Report Posted October 7, 2008 I loved the first bit where Aden was having his nightmare. I hope Aden does go to see Larry, it would probably help both of them. Quote
meant2live Posted October 7, 2008 Report Posted October 7, 2008 I am absolutely adoring this fanfic... its really well written and flows really well, starting to make me get my creative writing spark back too. Well done... can't wait for more... took me a good few days to catch up on everything, cos I read unlucky as well Quote
xknomex Posted October 7, 2008 Report Posted October 7, 2008 awwwwwwwww I loved the scene in the kitchen (before larry was brought up lol) poor Belle. and poor poor Aden having those horrible dreams. Update soon. xx Quote
Lustre Posted October 7, 2008 Report Posted October 7, 2008 The way you write Belle is so moving, her refusal to tell him about the pain he causes her and her desire to help him is heart warming. I loved the scene in the kitchen both before and after roman entered, the Adelle playfulness was great and I love the shared concern for Aden that Belle and Roman have. Quote
HAA Girl 08 Posted October 8, 2008 Report Posted October 8, 2008 Yay! Aden would never forgive himself if he knew he was accidentally hurting Belle. Very well written! Quote
wrongturntaken Posted October 8, 2008 Report Posted October 8, 2008 I think that was probably one of my favourite chapters! You're description of Aden's reaction to his nightmares and then how Belle dealt with them was just so... i can't even describe it. Fantastic! I really really really loved this chapter! Update soon! Quote
xknomex Posted October 8, 2008 Report Posted October 8, 2008 I'm guessing the blackness on her wrist is from the other night when Aden was holding her tightly during the nightmare or a happier option is that she is allergic to the metal in the bracelet and its reacting to her skin to give her a black mark. ( that happend to me once ) why cant Adelle be all fluffy forever and live in a bubble? If drew goes off somewhere and spreads that Aden is abusing Belle :angry: Update ASAP xx Quote
Taniya_K Posted October 8, 2008 Report Posted October 8, 2008 (edited) Lol! Would I let Drew do that?! And that is if your theory is right... I'll try to update tonight if I can and I remember lol. xoxo Edited October 8, 2008 by Taniya_K Quote
adelle Posted October 8, 2008 Report Posted October 8, 2008 Hmmm. Drew better not go spreading rumours!! Im glad Belle doesnt want him to touch the bracelet Great updating, looking forwards to more Quote
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