xknomex Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 *tear* I dont know why but that chapter really got to me. It was so emotional. I am really worried about Aden I need to give him a hug. Hopefully the talk tomorrow will end up happy not worse. Damn you Drew for pushing Aden over the edge!!! Update soon. and please make it all better. xxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mk1diva Posted October 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 *wiping the tear away* that was beautiful I loved the picture of his mother and Belle noticing the eyes my poor Aden hope they have a talk int he morning Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wrongturntaken Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 Aw, that was really sweet. His mother's items and the picture of him as a baby. I loved the description of his eyes. Very good chapter and had a really brilliant ending, you seemed to just have this calm tone throughout it which really fitted the chapter. Update soon? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H&A_diehard Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 That was a great chapter. Worth waiting for just as I thought it would be. Would it be too greedy to ask if there'll be another update tonight? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 ^ It wouldn't be greedy, but I can say I highly doubt it. I've had such a busy day [Thursday's always are] and I just managed to get that chapter complete before I started on my work. Sorry. But am glad you enjoyed it xoxo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
meant2live Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 Loved it very much... can't wait to see what happens next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H&A_diehard Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 ^ It wouldn't be greedy, but I can say I highly doubt it. I've had such a busy day [Thursday's always are] and I just managed to get that chapter complete before I started on my work. Sorry. But am glad you enjoyed it xoxo It's OK, I was only kidding anyway. Well, I wouldn't be upset if you could update obviously. But I appreciate how busy you are so don't worry about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 That was great. I like the Belle and Nicole friendship...if you can call it that? I hope that Aden's ok. The photo was sweet but kinds sad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAA Girl 08 Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 Ahhhhhhh! Such a tear jerker... beautifully written! I hadn't read this and the last two chapters, so reading them one after the other was good! Please, please update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adelle Posted October 9, 2008 Report Share Posted October 9, 2008 Awwwww! That was so sweet! Cuddled up in bed together at the end The picture was great too, I love how you described their matching eyes, that was really beautiful!! The Nicole/Belle interaction was great too, Nic looking out of Aden and calling Belle was so sweet! Can't wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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