adelle Posted October 10, 2008 Report Posted October 10, 2008 Oooooooo I really hope he doesn't get mad at her! So this means she went to the prison to see Larry? I can't wait to see where you are taking this!! You would have to be like the Queen of updates, you update so fast and the chapters are still brilliant Update soon!! Aw thanks And yes, it does mean that. I hope Aden doesn't get mad at her too... Ah thanks, I thought so but I wasn't sure. lol You are so evil! You should surprise us all and make him not mad at her, that would be a great twist! Quote
wrongturntaken Posted October 10, 2008 Report Posted October 10, 2008 That was brilliant!!!! I loved the way the informatiion unfolded between them! I wonder what Aden's going to do now?? update soon! Quote
zzazzb Posted October 11, 2008 Report Posted October 11, 2008 Oooooooo I really hope he doesn't get mad at her! So this means she went to the prison to see Larry? I can't wait to see where you are taking this!! You would have to be like the Queen of updates, you update so fast and the chapters are still brilliant Update soon!! which is why she shall live forever, and just update all the time ( i hope you dont have much of a life Taniya ) great chap. you wouldn't let Aden get mad at Belle would you.. ... ok let's re-phrase that. PLEASE DON'T LET ADEN GET MAD AT BELLE! Quote
Taniya_K Posted October 11, 2008 Report Posted October 11, 2008 which is why she shall live forever, and just update all the time ( i hope you dont have much of a life Taniya ) great chap. you wouldn't let Aden get mad at Belle would you.. ... ok let's re-phrase that. PLEASE DON'T LET ADEN GET MAD AT BELLE! Lol! Well, in between trying to get my degree, and my work, and hanging out with my mates, not to mention calling home once in a while, this is the only other thing I do lol! Ah... you'll just have to wait and see. I'm finishing the chapter off as we speak. I've been editting it for a day now and I'm just going to leave it as it is and post it once it's done. So it won't be toooooooooo long now! xoxo Quote
zzazzb Posted October 11, 2008 Report Posted October 11, 2008 Lol! Well, in between trying to get my degree, and my work, and hanging out with my mates, not to mention calling home once in a while, this is the only other thing I do lol! yeah, you have no life at all.. Quote
Zetti Posted October 11, 2008 Report Posted October 11, 2008 First to reply I loved the way you wrote Aden's pain and unhappiness, i can see his view and Belle's so great! Keep it up! Quote
adelle Posted October 11, 2008 Report Posted October 11, 2008 Great update!! I thought that Aden was going to break up with her, thank God you made it better in the end!! You write Aden's tourment so well and really capture all his emotions. Update soon Quote
wrongturntaken Posted October 11, 2008 Report Posted October 11, 2008 That was excellent!!!! The dialogue in this chapter was so natural and so realistic!!!! I loved both of the character's thoughts and reactions to each other! Absolutely fantastic! Update soon! Quote
monkeysmoke Posted October 11, 2008 Report Posted October 11, 2008 fantastic - as always! you write them faster than i can read them! It's brill! Quote
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