wrongturntaken Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 OMG! That was.... WOW! I got so in to that, my head was just zooming into the computer screen, . The dialogue and the way you portrayed it, i could so easily see it in my head, and both the characters made so much sense in what they were saying that i could see it from both sides of the argument. Which is why i'm gonna choose Drew... i hate myself for even saying that, even as a joke... it is COMPLETELY ADEN ALL THE WAY!!!!!! I liked how Belle never gave in but kind of wanted to explain to Drew the real reason she knew Aden had changed. The background history about Aden trying to kill his dad was good too! Update soon!!! I love these scenes with Drew... more please!!! Quote
xknomex Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 Drew He made Belle all upset I choose Aden, I'm always on his side. sorry I didn't comment on the other chapter, was away. Update soon xxxx P.S I need fluff Quote
H&A_diehard Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 both the characters made so much sense in what they were saying that i could see it from both sides of the argument. I couldn't. I couldn't see anything for red mist. Quote
monkeysmoke Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 oo I'm liking it. although i can see Aden being off with Belle and then her considering choosing Drew... oh boy oh boy... not good. Quote
xknomex Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 is it cheeky to ask for another update tonight?? xx P.S if you cant dont worry Quote
Taniya_K Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 Lol, it's not cheeky, and as much as I would like to post one, I don't have it done. I'm still working on it... somehow the words won't come out right. So I doubt I'll post anything tonight. Sorry! xoxo Quote
xknomex Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 Don't worry, I'm sure the chapter will be worth the wait. is the problem that you cant work out how much Adelle fluff to put in? *hint hint* will look forward to the next update whenever it is. xxxx Quote
Taniya_K Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 is the problem that you cant work out how much Adelle fluff to put in? *hint hint* Uh... hmm... ah... Adelle fluff... I've totally forgotten what that's like! I guess I should get back to basics, shouldn't I? Quote
xknomex Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 is the problem that you cant work out how much Adelle fluff to put in? *hint hint* Uh... hmm... ah... Adelle fluff... I've totally forgotten what that's like! I guess I should get back to basics, shouldn't I? well... ye xxx Quote
Lise Posted October 12, 2008 Report Posted October 12, 2008 That was good! If I was Belle it wouldn't have been a slap...he deserved a broken nose! Definitely on Aden's side. I love how Belle will defend him to the very end. I'm sure that whatever you write will be great, Taniya! Quote
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