Beate Posted October 15, 2008 Report Posted October 15, 2008 oh no...don't let them brake up. I know you won't...or will you??? A great update as always. Quote
xknomex Posted October 15, 2008 Report Posted October 15, 2008 well.... I liked the writing style, the descriptions and the way you wrote the argument. It was very realistic. However I didn't like the fact that Adelle had a fight :( please tell me that last bit wasn't a hint saying that one day Belle would leave him, please please please please please please please please please make it better!!!! Update ASAP! xxxxx Quote
Deborah Posted October 15, 2008 Report Posted October 15, 2008 Hope they make up really soon! Don't u dare break them up, lol! Quote
LAURZY! Posted October 15, 2008 Report Posted October 15, 2008 Loved the descriptions in this chapter!!! I'm sure everything will be fine very soon......wont it??? I think they need to have a proper heart to heart and get all their thoughts and feelings out. It would be VERY emotional, but very very sweet!! Great update Quote
wrongturntaken Posted October 15, 2008 Report Posted October 15, 2008 I love it when you write fights!!! you make them seem so realistic!!!! Excellent chapter!! i could see where they were both coming from and i loved that little bit at the end about Aden, that was nearly heartbreaking. I hope Belle sees through his pushing her away. update soon! Quote
Lise Posted October 15, 2008 Report Posted October 15, 2008 They are in desperate need of a "DnM"! That was good though. I hope they work things out and I hope that last (or was it 2nd to last) line wasn't meant to mean anything or you'll be in trouble! Really can't wait for the next chapter. Quote
Taniya_K Posted October 15, 2008 Report Posted October 15, 2008 What's "DnM"? Lol. Thanks for all the comments. I can't reveal anything... but you all know how I like happiness. Yet then again, angst is fun to write... Quote
Deborah Posted October 15, 2008 Report Posted October 15, 2008 Think Lise means a Deep and Meaningful, lol. & I agree Quote
Taniya_K Posted October 15, 2008 Report Posted October 15, 2008 Oh, right. Thanks for clearing that up. xoxo Quote
monkeysmoke Posted October 15, 2008 Report Posted October 15, 2008 Noooooooo! Not good! Not good at all! Not the chapter! Your writing was a la fantastique! As always! But Aden and Belle fighting! Big No No. Slap on wrist to Taniya, just a few days ago there were shower scenes! Not happy. (only joking, i trust you) xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Quote
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