Untroubled (by Taniya_K) - comments

[Aden+Belle forever]

In defense of xknomex, I can see where she is coming from

But I dont thing that Belle was angry with Aden, I think she was being independent, not letting Aden see how much pain she was really in

That what I think anyway, probably completely wrong lol

[LAURZY!]

Great update i really dont think it was boring at all!!

Really disliking Larry at the mo!!! I hope Belle lets Aden see her more vulnerable side and lets him look after her, that would be so sweet

[Taniya_K]

Oh, I see. Lol, no, you're right Aden+Belle forever. She was trying to act like it was nothing because she's so independent and doesn't want to seem weak, and because she doesn't want to make Aden feel guilty for her being in pain.

Sorry for confusing you! Like I've said before, sometimes I just get sloppy with what I write and mean.

Thanks for asking though!

xoxo

[Aden+Belle forever]

Oh, I see. Lol, no, you're right Aden+Belle forever. She was trying to act like it was nothing because she's so independent and doesn't want to seem weak, and because she doesn't want to make Aden feel guilty for her being in pain.

Sorry for confusing you! Like I've said before, sometimes I just get sloppy with what I write and mean.

Thanks for asking though!

xoxo

Your not a sloppy writer, not at all

Anyway, half the fun of writing these fics is finding out what other people think, like you said in a previous comment

[Deborah]

Another brilliant chapter, def not boring. You write really well, makes me want to keep reading more, which is what a good author does!

Hope Belle is going to be okay & they catch Larry

[xknomex]

Oh, I see. Lol, no, you're right Aden+Belle forever. She was trying to act like it was nothing because she's so independent and doesn't want to seem weak, and because she doesn't want to make Aden feel guilty for her being in pain.

Sorry for confusing you! Like I've said before, sometimes I just get sloppy with what I write and mean.

Thanks for asking though!

xoxo

Your not a sloppy writer!!!

I understand now, for a brief moment I forgot all about Belle's independence etc.. sorry.

Thanks for explaining Aden+Belle forever.

xxxxxx

[Deborah]

You are definitely NOT a sloppy writer, your a brilliant writer! Wish I had half the talent of you & all the other writers on here!

[Beate]

As said before, you are not a sloppy writer. You really got me all trough the chapter.

So sad that Larry did that, maybe just maybe Aden would have been able to forgive him, but not now.

Loved how Aden knew something was wrong just by the way the texts was.

Edited October 23, 2008 by Beate

[HAA Girl 08]

That was really good! Update soon

[adelle]

Larry!! Damn him for hurting Belle!

But does this explain why Belle has been in pain the previous chapters?

That was a great chapter!! Lots of drama Update soon!!