xknomex Posted October 25, 2008 Report Posted October 25, 2008 okay have just got back and read the chapter properly! It was BRILLIANT. I loved how you used the pictures to show that Larry was still in the bay. How you showed that Belle was still scared about the whole ordeal. I love how you write this fic Update soon xxx Quote
Aden+Belle forever Posted October 25, 2008 Report Posted October 25, 2008 Great chapter LOL at Ric and Belle but I cant believe Larry is back Please update soon Quote
LAURZY! Posted October 25, 2008 Report Posted October 25, 2008 Loved it Lol at Belle and Ric Loved how you showedBelle's vulnerable side towards the whole thing. Very well written Great update, cant wait to read more Quote
H&A_diehard Posted October 25, 2008 Report Posted October 25, 2008 Great update but you just had to leave it there didn't you? Loved the fluff at the start. And once Mattie mentioned the figure in the background I knew it was Larry. Hope he gets put away soon. Update soon. Like now. Quote
BeforeItsTooLate Posted October 26, 2008 Report Posted October 26, 2008 Aden and Belle at the beginning were so cute, him not wanting to leave her and all....and how you showed Belle's weaker side was really well written Yeesh...can't believe Larry's back. Can't wait for the next update Quote
adelle Posted October 26, 2008 Report Posted October 26, 2008 Great chapter!! Ooooooh I wonder what's going to happen to Larry?? Things are getting pretty interesting, update soon!! Quote
Lise Posted October 26, 2008 Report Posted October 26, 2008 That was great! I loved the Belle and Ric stuff. Larry's brave sticking around. I hope they find him. Quote
zzazzb Posted October 26, 2008 Report Posted October 26, 2008 Awesome update!!! I LOVED the fluff at the start! That was so sweet!!! I liked what you did with the pictures, very clever way to discover Larry is still in the bay! Poor Belle and Aden! Aden needds to stop blaming himself, it's not his fault!! Anyway, i am intrigued as to what will happen next!! Please update soon!!! I love this fic so much, especially at the weekend or non Adelle days of the show, it's like i pretend it's the real thing so i can have a fix of something new from Adelle! P.s. When you said about Ric, Mattie and Belle in the diner, for some reason my imagination went to the old diner and when i realised it wasn't when you said about the computers, i got all sad! lol I didn't even think about the new diner until i read that great update Taniya Larry's baaaaccckkk ! i hope Aden and Mattie did well in their examsv Quote
SAM27# Posted October 26, 2008 Report Posted October 26, 2008 Great Update!! Belle and Ric's friendship was so nice to read about.....This is missing in the show Belle so needs friends!!!!!!! Oooooo Larry!!!! (Thats all I can say about that!!!) Can't wait for more!!! Quote
xknomex Posted October 26, 2008 Report Posted October 26, 2008 any chance of an update today? If not dont worry!!! x xxx Quote
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